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Mysterious Crossing of Paths19 total reviews
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
What a lovely poem with a deep tone of fate and chance. I love the analogy you used in this and this one for sure you have my attention and vote. Awesome job.
I have been writing more personal poems lately but do have a few going in contests too so maybe someday soon we will get together for a little cheek to cheek again. Thanks for the lovely read!
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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What a lovely poem with a deep tone of fate and chance. I love the analogy you used in this and this one for sure you have my attention and vote. Awesome job.
I have been writing more personal poems lately but do have a few going in contests too so maybe someday soon we will get together for a little cheek to cheek again. Thanks for the lovely read!
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 19-May-2023
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Thank you my friend, miss you dearly!
Comment from AnnieDawn
What an interesting topic and you have carried it out so well in this post. I find this type of poetry to be the most difficult but your post flows so nicely, and easily. Great job on this one. I love it.
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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What an interesting topic and you have carried it out so well in this post. I find this type of poetry to be the most difficult but your post flows so nicely, and easily. Great job on this one. I love it.
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dylan VonWetzel
Wow! Short and powerful! Love the simplicity and sheer beauty of your words. Are you speaking of actual clothes being sewn into a statement piece or two lovers coming together to become something better than they were alone? I believe they call it, "living in the moment". :)
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Wow! Short and powerful! Love the simplicity and sheer beauty of your words. Are you speaking of actual clothes being sewn into a statement piece or two lovers coming together to become something better than they were alone? I believe they call it, "living in the moment". :)
Comment Written 18-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
I appreciate your feedback!
Comment from Janel Mock
The word play in this piece is on point! I love the topic and the title is perfect! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Janel
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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The word play in this piece is on point! I love the topic and the title is perfect! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to reading more of your work! ~Janel
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 18-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 2/4/6/8 poem contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Excellent entry for the 2/4/6/8 poem contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Well written poem about the handiwork called knitting. It is a craft that will be liked by many women. When they sit down and watch the big screen, they relax by knitting,.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Well written poem about the handiwork called knitting. It is a craft that will be liked by many women. When they sit down and watch the big screen, they relax by knitting,.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Why is the fate that put together this rope? I thought it was woven by people or machine. I guess your mean people here. It's the personification of the poetic tool you are using here.
Well done and good luck.
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Why is the fate that put together this rope? I thought it was woven by people or machine. I guess your mean people here. It's the personification of the poetic tool you are using here.
Well done and good luck.
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Your syllable count is perfect, love the font and coloring that you used, the artwork is simple, yet appropriate. Your words are touching. Nice work. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Your syllable count is perfect, love the font and coloring that you used, the artwork is simple, yet appropriate. Your words are touching. Nice work. Best of luck!
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you so much:)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Mystery Writer!
Your 2/4/6/8 poetic offers packs a punch and is filled with much truth.
Simply beautiful in both visual and emotive imagery.
Best wishes,
diane
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Hello, Mystery Writer!
Your 2/4/6/8 poetic offers packs a punch and is filled with much truth.
Simply beautiful in both visual and emotive imagery.
Best wishes,
diane
Comment Written 16-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Diane!
Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a wonderfully written poem. The symbolism of the thread and the two hands could be interpreted in so many different ways. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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This was a wonderfully written poem. The symbolism of the thread and the two hands could be interpreted in so many different ways. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 15-May-2023
reply by the author on 16-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
