My Notes From Above The Ground.
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Circumstances and My Birth."A collection of episods of a Homeless Woman.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
After an unstable start in life this girl might just make good and not succumb to the same life as her Mother, but who knows, it is your story, good luck with it, an entertaining piece, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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After an unstable start in life this girl might just make good and not succumb to the same life as her Mother, but who knows, it is your story, good luck with it, an entertaining piece, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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Thanks Dolly. Such stories are not unique unfortunately, I am sure there are ways we can prevent society from failing our children. Thanks again. My next chapter is almost ready. All the best.
Arun
Comment from mermaids
This is written like a memoir and held my interest. I am looking forward to reading about observations of life in West Virginia. Your writing is smooth and takes the reader to another place. Your description of the mother who is unaware of her pregnancy for three months stands out. Excellent writing.
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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This is written like a memoir and held my interest. I am looking forward to reading about observations of life in West Virginia. Your writing is smooth and takes the reader to another place. Your description of the mother who is unaware of her pregnancy for three months stands out. Excellent writing.
Comment Written 10-May-2023
reply by the author on 10-May-2023
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I am glad to learn that I succeeded in conveying my feelings about breaking down of values and humanity. West Virginia is just one of many places. I lived and traveled in the state for a decade. Thanks for your encouraging comment and ratings. All the best.
Arun