Comment from BermyBye50

Excellent

Gypsy Blue Rose,

This is a beautifully written free verse about intimacy. You've masterfully woven an intriguing tapestry of words producing great imagery of picturing sensuality. You are a highly talented poet who consistently writes masterpieces that expresses your creativity, talent and skill. You continue to set the bar for those of us who aspire to create poetry in its various forms.

All the best,

Eugene

 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

Thank you very much, Eugene. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

i love that second stanza! totally my favourite!

a great sensual poem
smooth flow
descriptive word choices

thank you for sharing
shelley :)



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 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

Thank you very much, Shelley. I appreciate your excellent review and kind words.

Gypsy hugs

Comment from royowen

Excellent

The narrative is deeply passionate and "embracing" it reminds me of some of my more passionate and I'll conceived trysts when I was young, this is beautifully written dear friend, bless you Roy

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 Comment Written 09-May-2023

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reply by the author on 09-May-2023

Thank you very much, Roy. I appreciate your kind review.

Gypsy hugs