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The Shooter

Too many guns, too many shootings.

37 total reviews 
Comment from Regina Elliott
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Hi nomi, gun violence has
taken such a huge human toll.
So many victims. In some parts of the country people's
horses have been shot. In my
state and in particular the
Asheville, NC area shootings
have been rising. Some
people's apartments and
homes are shot into with
people getting hurt or killed.
It's total insanity. You've
written this poem perfectly.
Many blessings to you. ~

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023
    Thank you for a very generous review. I appreciate your wise and wonderful thoughts. At the same my time, my heart aches at the troubles you and your neighbors must be going through as you suffer from increased gun violence. My heart and sympathy go out to you all.
Comment from Angel Debbie
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Guns used properly don't kill. It's the unskilled and the young who kill with or without realizing the consequences of their actions. And parents who are stupid enough to leave their guns out in the open for children to see and play with. I've seen too much death by guns, and I have also seen guns used properly so education of guns is the most important thing for me. Great write. Thank You for sharing. Have a great week a head!

 Comment Written 06-May-2023


reply by the author on 06-May-2023
    Thank you Debbie, you just may be an angel after all. LOL. I appreciate your kind remarks.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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I'm like you in that I don't advocate against gun ownership, as I wouldn't want criminals to be the only ones with them. But I sure wish there was a better to way to screen and keep them out of the hands of the mentally unstable or less capable of making sane decisions. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 04-May-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thank you for a measured and well thought out opinion. It is not a subject that can be easily explained or reasoned out.
Comment from shelley kaye
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i agree! people can have guns, but they need to be registered and legal and be kept locked up so kids can't get to them

this was a great thought-provoking poem about it
good word choices and smooth rhyme and flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)


 Comment Written 03-May-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    Thank you for your review comments.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I know Australia has a different perspective on gun ownership and I find it hard to understand why a society need so many. You have shown the repercussions of the impulsive use of guns. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 03-May-2023


reply by the author on 03-May-2023
    G'day. Thank you for your warm and supportive comments. I apologize if my attempt at an Australian greeting missed the mark
Comment from royowen
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I think if the public can't be trusted with a gun, it should be take away, and if folk don't a feasible reason for a gun, it needs to be taken, otherwise one's enemy is not Russia or China, North Korea, anyone else out of gunshot distance, it's your American neighbour, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    Your statement is the well stated opinion of one who is very wise and is not afraid to display that wisdom. Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, The Shooter, presented with three AABB-rhymed quatrains, seems to get some information from last week's latest "wrong door" incident. Once you own a gun, the timetable to sorrow begins.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    Guns in the hand of one who is responsible, who knows how and when to use it. One who knows the terrible consequences of taking or ending a human life, whether deserved or not. That is who can be trusted with a gun. Everyone else should stand down. One who hunts for food, and not for fun, are exempted.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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You poem touches on a very controversial subject, which begs the question. Why not? When is this senseless killing (including accidents) going to end???

 Comment Written 02-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    Probably never. The allure of guns and the imagined power they give to those who crave power is much too strong. Even when gun violence hits home to convert a particular individual, most others will just think, it will never happen to me and remain unchanged.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Amen. Well said, nomi. So many school shootings amidst all other shootings. My 5 years grandson just had a lock down drill. It's so scary. Someone brought a gun to school and apparently got through the gates fine. My son was at school when a shooter killed five Vietnamese children and wounded many more.

I hope laws are passed to ban mt-15 riffles and all guns background check. Those riffles are for soldiers at war not for civilians.

Well done.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    Thank you. Sadly, as long as there is money being given to those who block sane and sensible legislation, not much if anything will ever change.
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 02-May-2023
    Yes, I know. It's frustrating
Comment from Thesis
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A very powerful post. Unfortunately too many people use the do not back down law as an excuse for their abhorrent and racist behavior.

Responsible gun owners don't shoot people. It's as simple as that. There is no one on the planet that needs an AR 15 or other assault weapon unless they are military or police, and it's a shame in this day and age, they still need them.

 Comment Written 02-May-2023


reply by the author on 02-May-2023
    I think in this case need is relative to feeding a desire that is so strong that it becomes confused with actual need. Thank you for your insightful review comments.