Our Song
For our anniversary33 total reviews
Comment from Jim Wile
This is a beautiful anniversary poem, Janet. With wonderful imagery in every stanza and your inspired use of your tears and laughter playing the melody of your favorite song together, it is quite the tribute to you and your husband's love for each other. Very well done. Jim
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a beautiful anniversary poem, Janet. With wonderful imagery in every stanza and your inspired use of your tears and laughter playing the melody of your favorite song together, it is quite the tribute to you and your husband's love for each other. Very well done. Jim
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Jim for this stellar review, I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from June Sargent
The love that you share and have for each other will carry you through any storms that life throws at you. And looking for those threads of gold woven into each cloud afterwards will brighten your days. Happy anniversary! My husband and I just celebrated our 54th.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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The love that you share and have for each other will carry you through any storms that life throws at you. And looking for those threads of gold woven into each cloud afterwards will brighten your days. Happy anniversary! My husband and I just celebrated our 54th.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you June for this thoughtful review. Congratulations on 54 years - that is quite a milestone. Ours is 28 and counting :)))
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jmdg1954
Wow, Janet. I certainly can feel the love shine through on your anniversary poem. There are a number of lines I could highlight which resonated with me. My wife and I recently (4/28) celebrated quietly number 44. How many do you and yours have?
Wishing you the best,
John
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Wow, Janet. I certainly can feel the love shine through on your anniversary poem. There are a number of lines I could highlight which resonated with me. My wife and I recently (4/28) celebrated quietly number 44. How many do you and yours have?
Wishing you the best,
John
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 03-May-2023
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Congratulations on your 44 years together. We are at 28 years and counting.
Thank you John for your thoughtful review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely poem for your anniversary Janet, a time to treasure each year celebrated. Loved the internal rhymes of haunting, daunting and the well used alliteration. Beautiful presentation, and congrats to you both.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a lovely poem for your anniversary Janet, a time to treasure each year celebrated. Loved the internal rhymes of haunting, daunting and the well used alliteration. Beautiful presentation, and congrats to you both.
Comment Written 03-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Pearl for this stellar review and kind congrats. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Faith Williams
What a lovely anniversary serenade. I like how you use the senses in your piece from 'breezes whisper' to 'echo of a loon' to 'scent of gardenias.' And you have some wonderful images. 'Soft threads of gold weave through the morning clouds' is an amazing description. Thank so much for sharing your beautiful poem, and best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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What a lovely anniversary serenade. I like how you use the senses in your piece from 'breezes whisper' to 'echo of a loon' to 'scent of gardenias.' And you have some wonderful images. 'Soft threads of gold weave through the morning clouds' is an amazing description. Thank so much for sharing your beautiful poem, and best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Faith for this stellar review, I greatly appreciate it and your kind comments and that you enjoyed the use of the senses and imagery.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Your note and poem are appreciated, Janet.
-I don't think you are alone with having a crazy year,
and I am glad you have a strong relationship to get
you through the difficult times.
-You have used excellent nature imagery to
express many different emotions, like
"The haunting, daunting echo of a loon."
-I like your concluding verse with "two-part harmony."
-One very small thing: The scent....fills the air.
-Thanks for sharing your poem.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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-Your note and poem are appreciated, Janet.
-I don't think you are alone with having a crazy year,
and I am glad you have a strong relationship to get
you through the difficult times.
-You have used excellent nature imagery to
express many different emotions, like
"The haunting, daunting echo of a loon."
-I like your concluding verse with "two-part harmony."
-One very small thing: The scent....fills the air.
-Thanks for sharing your poem.
Comment Written 02-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Pam for this stellar review, I greatly appreciate it and the kind correction. This is always a challenge for me to get.
Blessings
Janet
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You are very welcome, Janet, and I appreciate your reply.
Comment from Cindy Decker 2
Janet,
Your poem flows silky smooth and your choice of words add to the beauty of your poem.
Exceptional work, Janet.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Janet,
Your poem flows silky smooth and your choice of words add to the beauty of your poem.
Exceptional work, Janet.
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings,
Cindy
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Cindy for this stellar review, I greatly appreciate it and the sparkling stars.
Blessings
Janet
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You?re welcome, Janet!
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Janet,
first of all... A very happy Anniversary to you and your love.
Your poem had an ageless feel to it... something so full of life, enhancing visual senses through thought.
Your rhyme in this format worked a treat.
All the very best of wishes in this 'love' contest Janet... but it sounds as though you have already won that contest... and who knows, you may hit a double!
With our thoughts we create...
the gift of love.
Kind regards,
James.
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Hi Janet,
first of all... A very happy Anniversary to you and your love.
Your poem had an ageless feel to it... something so full of life, enhancing visual senses through thought.
Your rhyme in this format worked a treat.
All the very best of wishes in this 'love' contest Janet... but it sounds as though you have already won that contest... and who knows, you may hit a double!
With our thoughts we create...
the gift of love.
Kind regards,
James.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you James for this stellar review and kind comments. Greatly appreciated.
Blessings
Janet
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My pleasure Janet.
Have a great weekend.
James.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A fine tribute to your anniversary here Janet and congratulations. A fine love poem for the contest, I enjoyed your end rhymes, good luck, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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A fine tribute to your anniversary here Janet and congratulations. A fine love poem for the contest, I enjoyed your end rhymes, good luck, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Dolly for this thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a beautiful anniversary poem. The imagery is lovely, as are the thoughts of love. I consider it truly outstanding and marked it so, even though there is one grammatical error. It should be "A morning dew lies heavily. (Hardest verb tense to get right every time is lie/lay!)
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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This is a beautiful anniversary poem. The imagery is lovely, as are the thoughts of love. I consider it truly outstanding and marked it so, even though there is one grammatical error. It should be "A morning dew lies heavily. (Hardest verb tense to get right every time is lie/lay!)
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 06-May-2023
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Thank you Verna for this stellar review and for the kind correction. This is a tricky one for me and I appreciate you help and those beautiful stars.
Blessings
Janet
