Love and Loss
Viewing comments for Chapter 17 "No return"NaPoWriMo April Poetry Contest
12 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was brilliant! I hadn't thought of it that way, but you're right - time repeats but you can never go back. I also liked your rhyme. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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This was brilliant! I hadn't thought of it that way, but you're right - time repeats but you can never go back. I also liked your rhyme. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Jessi!!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
The only rewind we can enjoy are the memories that come back to us, at our command. Otherwise, as you say, time can be unkind, not allowing for a re-take. You have done a find job with your eight words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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The only rewind we can enjoy are the memories that come back to us, at our command. Otherwise, as you say, time can be unkind, not allowing for a re-take. You have done a find job with your eight words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jessica, if only we could go back in
time sweet girl...but I must say...besides
for our shells growing old...there are very few
things I would change in my life...because
everything I have experienced in my life...it
has made me who I am today...
I just wish time would slow down my sweet friend...
sigh...
so few words to say so much...
I love your poem you...and love the picture
very nicely done...God Bless and good luck
in the contest...love you..Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hi Jessica, if only we could go back in
time sweet girl...but I must say...besides
for our shells growing old...there are very few
things I would change in my life...because
everything I have experienced in my life...it
has made me who I am today...
I just wish time would slow down my sweet friend...
sigh...
so few words to say so much...
I love your poem you...and love the picture
very nicely done...God Bless and good luck
in the contest...love you..Linda xxoo
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Linda!! I appreciate your reviews, as always! Much love!
Xo
Jessica
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always so welcome...and I appreciate you as
well...much love right back at you...Linda xxoo 😘🤗🙏💗🌼
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there my friend this is a lovely, eight-word piece you've penned for the contest
I love the picture it's awesome!
Good luck!
-Kerry
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Hello there my friend this is a lovely, eight-word piece you've penned for the contest
I love the picture it's awesome!
Good luck!
-Kerry
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Kerry!
Comment from Lea Tonin1
This is awesome love it!! And you got to cool rhyme in there too awesome!
And reading some good stuff today so far but yours tops it! I hate this as another six start just on its merits alone. You have a great picture there too and your presentation font and word choice looks really good. I can see no issues with grammar or aesthetics. It's a beautiful gorgeous phone alright. Thank you for this awesome submission worthy of 6 stars. I hope you have a great day!
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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This is awesome love it!! And you got to cool rhyme in there too awesome!
And reading some good stuff today so far but yours tops it! I hate this as another six start just on its merits alone. You have a great picture there too and your presentation font and word choice looks really good. I can see no issues with grammar or aesthetics. It's a beautiful gorgeous phone alright. Thank you for this awesome submission worthy of 6 stars. I hope you have a great day!
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, Lea!!
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Anytime
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Well deserved
Comment from Cherish Adams
Yes ma'am. That is absolutely correct and you did it very few words. Well said and done. I hope you do well in the contest Jessica.
Cherish
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Yes ma'am. That is absolutely correct and you did it very few words. Well said and done. I hope you do well in the contest Jessica.
Cherish
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Cherish!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You said a lot in these eight little words. Yes, one can do repeats of time, but can't rewind it back. One needs to pause and think before acting. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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You said a lot in these eight little words. Yes, one can do repeats of time, but can't rewind it back. One needs to pause and think before acting. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Barbara!
Comment from Eternal Muse
That is a nice rendition of the contest. You packed a lot in these 8 words.
I liked your imagery, visuals, your fancy font and presentation.
Good luck in the contest. I think it will do well.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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That is a nice rendition of the contest. You packed a lot in these 8 words.
I liked your imagery, visuals, your fancy font and presentation.
Good luck in the contest. I think it will do well.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much! Truly appreciated.
Comment from Ricky1024
"No Return" was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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"No Return" was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thanks so much!
Comment from kiwisteveh
Ha! That's clever!
Great use of your allotted number of words to create a balance, rhythmic and rhyming poem that also incorporates a strong message. I imagine this has a decent chance of doing well in the contest, so good luck!
Steve
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Ha! That's clever!
Great use of your allotted number of words to create a balance, rhythmic and rhyming poem that also incorporates a strong message. I imagine this has a decent chance of doing well in the contest, so good luck!
Steve
Comment Written 27-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2023
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Thank you, Steve! I truly appreciate that.
