Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

Who or what inspires you to write?

so to answer the question in the contest announcement - you write basically because you like to write?
okay, i'll take that answer :-)


one suggestion i have is to maybe play with some line and stanza breaks a bit?
just an observational thought while reading...


thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

thanks as always

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Organising our thoughts and making a plan to write a poem and collecting appropriate words will create interesting reading for others, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 22-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Apr-2023

thanks as always