Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Seasons of Mind - I"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
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Comment from karenina
We fight wars for freedom. Liberty flows in our veins and nestles in our marrow. And yet was it not "free will" that set us asunder and brought us face to face with sin? It's a conundrum I've often pondered. I'm hopeful that one day I will understand why such a loving God gave such imperfect beings the ability to mess things up. Ah. One day it will all make sense. I lean back into those fruit trees as well.
What a journey you're taking me on!
Karenina
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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We fight wars for freedom. Liberty flows in our veins and nestles in our marrow. And yet was it not "free will" that set us asunder and brought us face to face with sin? It's a conundrum I've often pondered. I'm hopeful that one day I will understand why such a loving God gave such imperfect beings the ability to mess things up. Ah. One day it will all make sense. I lean back into those fruit trees as well.
What a journey you're taking me on!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 02-May-2023
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Thank you for your dedication and supportive comments.
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Absolutely my pleasure!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This is a nicely rhyme rendition of what happened in the Garden of Eden
to bring free will and the option to believe or not to believe. I like the discerning and philosophical feel to this poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Hi Jim,
This is a nicely rhyme rendition of what happened in the Garden of Eden
to bring free will and the option to believe or not to believe. I like the discerning and philosophical feel to this poem.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 22-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Joan, I appreciate your your thoughts and comments,
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You?re welcome on both accounts, Jim.
Joan
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Seasons of Mind I, makes the reader think that the history of the fall of man did not necessarily have to be a one-off event. Perhaps mankind could blow it again.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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This poem, Seasons of Mind I, makes the reader think that the history of the fall of man did not necessarily have to be a one-off event. Perhaps mankind could blow it again.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2023
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Bill, if we keep pushing it, for example lie, something being a good thing that turns out to be a bed thing like AI for example, yep! We could screw it all up again.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I belive knowledge in itself is not bad, the problem is how people use it. People from the beginning wanted the freedom to make their own choices in with that came the end of immortality and banished from paradise.
Interesting poem story with an outstanding presentation.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I belive knowledge in itself is not bad, the problem is how people use it. People from the beginning wanted the freedom to make their own choices in with that came the end of immortality and banished from paradise.
Interesting poem story with an outstanding presentation.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from mermaids
Love the pic, it fits your words so perfectly. Excellent poetic form that makes the reader think. How we disobeyed God and continue to disobey Him at times. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words that adds to the strength of your theme.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Love the pic, it fits your words so perfectly. Excellent poetic form that makes the reader think. How we disobeyed God and continue to disobey Him at times. I admire your smooth flow of rhyming words that adds to the strength of your theme.
Comment Written 21-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Paul McFarland
I have come to believe that the forbidden fruit is a metaphor. That fruit may very well be technology. We have eaten of this fruit, and the consequences are close at hand.
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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I have come to believe that the forbidden fruit is a metaphor. That fruit may very well be technology. We have eaten of this fruit, and the consequences are close at hand.
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Paul, I could not agree more fully! Come on, we Know that anything man can and does create has the potential for mass destruction so why not to that list AI. We will never learn it seems.
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Yes, AI is very scary. Did you see the interview that Elon Musk had with Tucker Carlson?
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Yes...unsettling!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
You really write wonderful poetry. Do you enter any of these in FanStory's contests? The words in your poem brings a serene feeling to the heart. I see you wrote this for the NaPoWriMo contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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You really write wonderful poetry. Do you enter any of these in FanStory's contests? The words in your poem brings a serene feeling to the heart. I see you wrote this for the NaPoWriMo contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Rosemary, thank you I do enter some contests, but realize free verse is read and enjoyed selectively,
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Impressive artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme that tell a story.
-A very good opening verse.
-I like you line about the different kinds of fruit.
-A good segue to the Tree of Life.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Well done.
-One very minor thing: those apples have been
*I would use had to indicate the past
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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-Impressive artwork and nice presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem.
-Effective imagery and rhyme that tell a story.
-A very good opening verse.
-I like you line about the different kinds of fruit.
-A good segue to the Tree of Life.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Well done.
-One very minor thing: those apples have been
*I would use had to indicate the past
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 21-Apr-2023
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Pam, very good catch! Always know I am very grateful for your wise and carefully presented comments.
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You are very welcome, Jim.
Comment from Aussie
God gave us a kaleidoscope of wonders. Some folks go around with blinders on. We who love the Lord soak up the beauty of every living creature or plant we meet on our journey. Eve tempted Adam and started the free will scenario. Look what we have done! Mother earth cries out for surcease. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Kay xx
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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God gave us a kaleidoscope of wonders. Some folks go around with blinders on. We who love the Lord soak up the beauty of every living creature or plant we meet on our journey. Eve tempted Adam and started the free will scenario. Look what we have done! Mother earth cries out for surcease. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Kay xx
Comment Written 20-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Kay, you are so correct! Thank you for your blessing and shared thoughts! They are very valued, Jim
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
You have penned a beautiful poem here, my friend. I really liked how you brought the other fruits into this garden, perhaps a peach, pear. Who knows; but you're right about that that was the beginning of free will. Brings a lot of what Ifs in this world to ponder on.
Nicely done
-Kerry
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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You have penned a beautiful poem here, my friend. I really liked how you brought the other fruits into this garden, perhaps a peach, pear. Who knows; but you're right about that that was the beginning of free will. Brings a lot of what Ifs in this world to ponder on.
Nicely done
-Kerry
Comment Written 19-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2023
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Thank you Kerry!
