Seasons of Change
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Seasons of Faith - I"A collection of 30 poems in thirty days
22 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Faith. I believe I just mentioned it in my last review as an essential part of lasting love...and so I am again happily surprised that just as my own mind was assimilating this, YOU have turned to yet another theme of growth and change...and (more importantly)-- the blest reminder that in a world of changes and challenges, there is He who created us...who never alters His love for us!
Karenina
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Faith. I believe I just mentioned it in my last review as an essential part of lasting love...and so I am again happily surprised that just as my own mind was assimilating this, YOU have turned to yet another theme of growth and change...and (more importantly)-- the blest reminder that in a world of changes and challenges, there is He who created us...who never alters His love for us!
Karenina
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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yes, absolutely!
Comment from Boogienights
These are beautiful explanations of what occurs in the Bible, which I appreciate. You really do have a way with words, I understand better when reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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These are beautiful explanations of what occurs in the Bible, which I appreciate. You really do have a way with words, I understand better when reading your poetry. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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I sure value you, as a constant reminder to me, that words shared can provide someone something of importance.
Comment from DeboraDyess
What an excellent poem! I love that you took Genesis 1:3 and broke it into headers for this. i love that you equate the physical light to spiritual goals of God for each child. Wonderful! You also lined up the first day with birth, which was cool.
A great poem! I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more.
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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What an excellent poem! I love that you took Genesis 1:3 and broke it into headers for this. i love that you equate the physical light to spiritual goals of God for each child. Wonderful! You also lined up the first day with birth, which was cool.
A great poem! I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more.
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much!
Comment from sunnilicious
Great artwork choice. Nice biblical quotes. I liked how you weaved the biblical quotes with your interpretation in stanzas. Very nice storytelling style. Excellent work :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Great artwork choice. Nice biblical quotes. I liked how you weaved the biblical quotes with your interpretation in stanzas. Very nice storytelling style. Excellent work :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from shelley kaye
a nice poem poetically telling about the scripture lines
smooth flow with interesting and thought-provoking word choices
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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a nice poem poetically telling about the scripture lines
smooth flow with interesting and thought-provoking word choices
thank you for sharing!
shelley :)
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you Shelley!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Jim,
This poem has rhymed and unrhymed stanzas but still flows well.
It shows how the first day began and every first day for every newborn,
The baby comes out of the dark into the light.
The light of faith shows us the path so we won't be blind. But some still are.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Hi Jim,
This poem has rhymed and unrhymed stanzas but still flows well.
It shows how the first day began and every first day for every newborn,
The baby comes out of the dark into the light.
The light of faith shows us the path so we won't be blind. But some still are.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you Joan,
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No problem, Jim.
Joan
Comment from nomi338
There is a very good reason that Satan the Devil hates God and all the those he loves. Satan will never be able to create anything as awesomely beautiful as the Earth and all of its inhabitants. Satan, despite his best efforts will never have servants that will forego their own best interests, comforts and self service to render worshipful devotion to their God.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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There is a very good reason that Satan the Devil hates God and all the those he loves. Satan will never be able to create anything as awesomely beautiful as the Earth and all of its inhabitants. Satan, despite his best efforts will never have servants that will forego their own best interests, comforts and self service to render worshipful devotion to their God.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Nomi, so true are the words of a wise man! Thank you for your steadfast support and comments. Always appreciated on this end!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
God is the light of the world. Yes, we have free will. God wants us to choose to follow Him. I fear many in today's world have chosen not too. This is a wonderful NaPoWriMO contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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God is the light of the world. Yes, we have free will. God wants us to choose to follow Him. I fear many in today's world have chosen not too. This is a wonderful NaPoWriMO contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you Barbara, I truly appreciate your supportive comment.
Comment from estory
Interesting format, with these stanzas juxtaposed between the lines from the Bible and the creation of light story. It waxes a bit philosophical, reads like an interpretation and expounding on that image of the creation of light, the possibilities in that moment as well as the pitfalls to come and the sacrifice of Jesus. estory
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Interesting format, with these stanzas juxtaposed between the lines from the Bible and the creation of light story. It waxes a bit philosophical, reads like an interpretation and expounding on that image of the creation of light, the possibilities in that moment as well as the pitfalls to come and the sacrifice of Jesus. estory
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Thank you for your continued comments and relfection, which O vlaue so much!
Comment from Chrissy710
Hi JLR,
You obviously have a strong faith, and this is reflected within your words which was nicely presented in font choice and image. Well, we are a 1/3rd of the way through this challenge and I think some good work has been produced
Cheers Chris
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Hi JLR,
You obviously have a strong faith, and this is reflected within your words which was nicely presented in font choice and image. Well, we are a 1/3rd of the way through this challenge and I think some good work has been produced
Cheers Chris
Comment Written 13-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
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Chris, yes so many good submissions are reflected within FS on this annual contest, it is such a wonderful experience to read the depth of talent, in which I play a minor part.
