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An April Fool

Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Denim"
NaPoWriMo 2023

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Comment from Alexandra Trovato
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Very cute and well written. You do have a little typo I think you meant to write than not that durability. I enjoyed reading your descriptions and I feel the same way about denim and jeans. Good work! :))

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    I appreciate the edit. Thank you :)
Comment from country ranch writer
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My kids were the levi generation it had to be Levi's !So expensive too. Western wear was the thing for them growing up. Only now will they wear wranglers cause they are cheaper.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    You're the best. Thank you very much!
    Hearts & hugs :)
reply by country ranch writer on 13-Apr-2023
    Heartsandhugs
reply by country ranch writer on 13-Apr-2023
    Heartsandhugs
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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I enjoyed this lighthearted poem about wearing blue jeans. It is a different subject and allows the reader to pay more attention and respect when putting on a pair of jeans - one of the best inventions in wardrobe attire for both genders.

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Thank you :)
Comment from royowen
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Yes, my wife is a jeans wearer, as is my younger daughter, however my elder daughter tends to wear dresses, beautifully written on this the 12th day of April, well done Alicia, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    You're nice. Thank you :)
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm glad you can enjoy denim. I remember when we had to have a dress code at work but jeans were allowed on Casual Fridays. Now everyday is casual. Jeans are great!

or act carouse... (or carouse) Since 'carouse' is a verb not an adverb, you probably don't want to use "act"

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Hello Helen. I appreciate the edit. Thank you :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Jeans are hardy and practical and I live in them in England as the weather is never that warm and I think jeans can look quite smart, a fine write and jeans are mostly banned in offices as they don't look professional, much enjoyed Alicia, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 12-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 13-Apr-2023
    Hel!ow Dolly. I'm sure you look great in jeans. I didn't of denim as being warmer. Good to know. I think it's allowed professionally on Casual Fridays. Suits are more acceptable for meetings. You're nice. Thank you :)