Bewitching Path
An evening walk21 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You did a wonderful job with this Lauranelle form Yvonne. I found the 10 syllable lines took a bit more work, myself. You've set a lovely scene. Well done, cheers.
Valda
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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You did a wonderful job with this Lauranelle form Yvonne. I found the 10 syllable lines took a bit more work, myself. You've set a lovely scene. Well done, cheers.
Valda
Comment Written 14-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 14-Apr-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This lovely verse conveys a feeling of deep peace and tranquillity, the dream only interrupted briefly by the "fox's bark." The imagery and imagination are enchanting; the rhyme always perfect and unforced and the repetition at the end of course giving the whole stroll through nature a satisfying sense of completion. Well done on this entry. Best wishes, Debbie
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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This lovely verse conveys a feeling of deep peace and tranquillity, the dream only interrupted briefly by the "fox's bark." The imagery and imagination are enchanting; the rhyme always perfect and unforced and the repetition at the end of course giving the whole stroll through nature a satisfying sense of completion. Well done on this entry. Best wishes, Debbie
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
A most enjoyable peek into the world of enchantment so eloquently expressed.
I felt like I was walking the path and peeking too which sadly I was not.
I enjoyed the style and intriguing tale.
Truly a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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A most enjoyable peek into the world of enchantment so eloquently expressed.
I felt like I was walking the path and peeking too which sadly I was not.
I enjoyed the style and intriguing tale.
Truly a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 12-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you for taking the trip with me. Very much appreciated.
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You're welcome
Comment from Ben Colder
This brought fond memories. As a boy hurrying home from a friend's home or perhaps just a stroll after sunset, whippoorwill call, I remember oh so well. Good one, Arkie.
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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This brought fond memories. As a boy hurrying home from a friend's home or perhaps just a stroll after sunset, whippoorwill call, I remember oh so well. Good one, Arkie.
Comment Written 11-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 12-Apr-2023
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Thank you. When we lived in the woods, we heard whippoorwills all the time.
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I love to hear them.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Glorious! You haven't lost your elegant touch. Lovely imagery and graceful flow. Hope all is well--I've been offsite these past weeks--wanted to pop in.
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Glorious! You haven't lost your elegant touch. Lovely imagery and graceful flow. Hope all is well--I've been offsite these past weeks--wanted to pop in.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 11-Apr-2023
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Glad to see you again. Thank you for the lovely remarks.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
What a fun magical club entry you've created. I love the fairytale aspect of it. I could see it all happening as I read. Great descriptions. This was a lot of fun to read, and it flows perfectly.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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What a fun magical club entry you've created. I love the fairytale aspect of it. I could see it all happening as I read. Great descriptions. This was a lot of fun to read, and it flows perfectly.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you. A little glimpse into my imaginary world.
Comment from Ric Myworld
You've created a fairytale world with your dancing little people, and of course, I'm imagining giant monsters off in the weeds. But that's just how my mind works. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You've created a fairytale world with your dancing little people, and of course, I'm imagining giant monsters off in the weeds. But that's just how my mind works. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I scared the monsters away! Thanks, Ric.
Comment from Eternal Muse
An excellent Lauranelle and thank you for introducing us to this form. I never heard of it, though I've written both a villanelle and terzanelle.
Fantastic imagery, visuals, presentation and a choice of an artwork.
Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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An excellent Lauranelle and thank you for introducing us to this form. I never heard of it, though I've written both a villanelle and terzanelle.
Fantastic imagery, visuals, presentation and a choice of an artwork.
Thank you for sharing, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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I'm so glad. Thank you!
Comment from Jim Wile
You've done a marvelous job with this complicated structure and rhyme scheme. You've made a difficult form sound so natural. I loved the image of the forest path you presented and coming across a group of dancing fairies or fauns. It reminded me of something from C.S. Lewis's world. I loved that picture too. Terrific poem! Jim
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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You've done a marvelous job with this complicated structure and rhyme scheme. You've made a difficult form sound so natural. I loved the image of the forest path you presented and coming across a group of dancing fairies or fauns. It reminded me of something from C.S. Lewis's world. I loved that picture too. Terrific poem! Jim
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I'm happy you liked it. I live in my own little world, but it's okay. They all know me there. hahahaha
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was a lovely Lauranelle, dear SATP! I loved the magic with the fairies dancing beside the old tree under the moonlight, which of course is magical in itself. Hearing the sounds of the fox and the owl in the background as you walked along that path. It was a beautiful poem, my dear sister. Very well done. Love and hugs. Hope you had a lovely Easter? :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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That was a lovely Lauranelle, dear SATP! I loved the magic with the fairies dancing beside the old tree under the moonlight, which of course is magical in itself. Hearing the sounds of the fox and the owl in the background as you walked along that path. It was a beautiful poem, my dear sister. Very well done. Love and hugs. Hope you had a lovely Easter? :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 10-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for this. You know I live in my own little world. hahahaha. Easter was a good day!
