Hickory, Dickery & Dock Escapade
A Mango and Bert Story26 total reviews
Comment from Julie Helms
What a cute story! It was engaging and adventurous. Now you should suggest this homework assignment as a contest here. Then we could find out why there are three blind mice or where Mary got her lamb from. Lots of fun! Julie
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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What a cute story! It was engaging and adventurous. Now you should suggest this homework assignment as a contest here. Then we could find out why there are three blind mice or where Mary got her lamb from. Lots of fun! Julie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Oooh? good ideas . Thank you.
I appreciate your reading and feedback,
John
Comment from Ben Colder
LOL. Now you have me looking inside my grandfather clock just in case the mouse family has paid me a visit. Good write, John, it brought smiles on my face to start the day. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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LOL. Now you have me looking inside my grandfather clock just in case the mouse family has paid me a visit. Good write, John, it brought smiles on my face to start the day. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Fantastic, Ben.
Thank you a bunch for all those stars.
I appreciate your stopping by,
John
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a well written story! it's creative and relatable, too. You use vivid imagery and descriptive words. Your Author Note was very helpful. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well done.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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This is a well written story! it's creative and relatable, too. You use vivid imagery and descriptive words. Your Author Note was very helpful. I enjoyed reviewing this, as will others. Well done.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Alex, thank you for your sincere review. Your words were warm and welcome.
John
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Oh brilliant, John! A children's story that engages the adults in a fun and familiar romp through that wonderful nursery rhyme! The characters are all so vivid and I love the way Dock emerges as the heroine, swinging on the pendulum. Your story is presented clearly in a well structured and readable style. And it's a lovely, feel-good start to my day which I always need. The only thing I'd change is 'em to 'im' as it's referring to 'him.' But that's being very picky:) Well done! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Oh brilliant, John! A children's story that engages the adults in a fun and familiar romp through that wonderful nursery rhyme! The characters are all so vivid and I love the way Dock emerges as the heroine, swinging on the pendulum. Your story is presented clearly in a well structured and readable style. And it's a lovely, feel-good start to my day which I always need. The only thing I'd change is 'em to 'im' as it's referring to 'him.' But that's being very picky:) Well done! Debbie
Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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You can be picky! I want my Mango & Bert stories to be perfect.
I appreciate your wonderful review filled with positivity! And those 6 stars, I?m honored .
Thank you so much. Since you?re five hours ahead of me, I hope you had a wonderful Sunday.
John
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
What a nice kids story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. It did not talk down to them and was adventursome, and held my interest too. I didn't think much of the kibble pancakes, but you can'r have everything. :-) Karen
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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What a nice kids story. I enjoyed it thoroughly. It did not talk down to them and was adventursome, and held my interest too. I didn't think much of the kibble pancakes, but you can'r have everything. :-) Karen
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Thank you Karen. This is a great review.
Enjoy your Sunday,
John
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Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
Excellent! Mango followed the teacher's instructions to the letter. I was just surprised that the parents let Dickory and Dock go searching for Hickory - such a dangerous expedition. kay
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reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Excellent! Mango followed the teacher's instructions to the letter. I was just surprised that the parents let Dickory and Dock go searching for Hickory - such a dangerous expedition. kay
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Comment Written 03-Mar-2024
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2024
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Kay, thank you for a great review.
Hope your Sunday was eventful!
John
