Caution!
A brief description of our increasingly dangerous world.29 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
The powerful beginning and poignant message throughout this piece with its damn and damnation rhetoric. Speaks out loud about the ending is near and for all its worth we have very little time to bring salvation to the core and delve into the deep and devilish strife of God's REvelations!
Thanks for addressing this issue for all of us to read and ponder. Let's hope we find an answer before it is too late!
Jesse
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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The powerful beginning and poignant message throughout this piece with its damn and damnation rhetoric. Speaks out loud about the ending is near and for all its worth we have very little time to bring salvation to the core and delve into the deep and devilish strife of God's REvelations!
Thanks for addressing this issue for all of us to read and ponder. Let's hope we find an answer before it is too late!
Jesse
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Unfortunately, for some the end will come as a surprise, as they argue with the rising and setting of the sun. An event that takes place right before their eyes daily. Thank you Jesse, your review comments are spot on.
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My comments were simply off the cuff and didn't go into the detail I wanted to go into in the end.
I hope you understand.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Shiver my timbers, the thought, though real, is not erected through a place by a sickly being prompted by a envious being that wanteed Father to choose him rather than His glorified Son who did not seek honor for Himself.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Shiver my timbers, the thought, though real, is not erected through a place by a sickly being prompted by a envious being that wanteed Father to choose him rather than His glorified Son who did not seek honor for Himself.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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I know. This is a scenario that is easily recognized, as it is being played out in many families. Hopefully not our own.
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
You wrote a good poem. It has good flow and rhyme. It has meaning. It was interesting. One part, I personally, didn't enjoy reading, but I am just one person. You refered to the devil as god of something, of hate. As far as I believe, the devil, lower cased by the way, was banished from Heaven. The devil was never made the god of anything. That could be part of a non fiction poem, I understand, and you wrote well. I just have to point out that as I believe, you have the devil a boost. The devil was banished. That's all. The devil has no power over God nor; God's Children. Good writing evolks emotuon, so I do believe you are a good writer.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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You wrote a good poem. It has good flow and rhyme. It has meaning. It was interesting. One part, I personally, didn't enjoy reading, but I am just one person. You refered to the devil as god of something, of hate. As far as I believe, the devil, lower cased by the way, was banished from Heaven. The devil was never made the god of anything. That could be part of a non fiction poem, I understand, and you wrote well. I just have to point out that as I believe, you have the devil a boost. The devil was banished. That's all. The devil has no power over God nor; God's Children. Good writing evolks emotuon, so I do believe you are a good writer.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Firstly, I thank you for your review. Not wishing to disagree with a reviewer, I would refer the book of First John, chapter 5, verse 19 which states: We know that we originate with God, but the whole world is lying in the power of the wicked one NWT 2013. The wicked one referred to here speaks of Satan the Devil.
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Very stark reminder indeed, of our fallen world. Evil crouching behind every door be it church or school doors. You painted a grim but true picture of where our society is heading to.
Great writing!!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Very stark reminder indeed, of our fallen world. Evil crouching behind every door be it church or school doors. You painted a grim but true picture of where our society is heading to.
Great writing!!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you very much.
Comment from JT traveller
A poem that forces us all to soul search. What an opening line! That is powerful writing. A message well delivered that gently directs us toward the Bible for answers. A fantastic piece of writing.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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A poem that forces us all to soul search. What an opening line! That is powerful writing. A message well delivered that gently directs us toward the Bible for answers. A fantastic piece of writing.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much, your comments are supportive and uplifting as well.
Comment from Sanku
with my eyes open I acted blind...what a brilliant opening! This is what most of us do. Ignore warnings
The shoot outs in places of worship, schools ,shopping malls -all point out to the fact that aggression is here to stay .man is going back to be an animal
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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with my eyes open I acted blind...what a brilliant opening! This is what most of us do. Ignore warnings
The shoot outs in places of worship, schools ,shopping malls -all point out to the fact that aggression is here to stay .man is going back to be an animal
Comment Written 09-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2023
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Thank you. Praise such as this from an author I greatly admire and respect, does much to boost my confidence.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Caution!, turns the readers to the end of the Bible for some soul searching on the end of times and what is predicted that would look like. Look around.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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This poem, Caution!, turns the readers to the end of the Bible for some soul searching on the end of times and what is predicted that would look like. Look around.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you. It will be for some the best of times, for some others the worst.
Comment from estory
I think you speak for all of us here, my friend. There's all the frustrations we feel in being surrounded by gunshots and scams we can't seem to get out of by ourselves. I like how you put that glimmer of hope at the end, when the devil gets chained for a thousand years. estory
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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I think you speak for all of us here, my friend. There's all the frustrations we feel in being surrounded by gunshots and scams we can't seem to get out of by ourselves. I like how you put that glimmer of hope at the end, when the devil gets chained for a thousand years. estory
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Thank you. I can hardly wait for the respite of a possible thousand years of recovery physically and an absence of hurt, harm and danger.
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A timely warning against the dangers which lie in unexpected places. The poet shows that it is only too easy for the young or naive to be abused, even in organisations like the church.
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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A timely warning against the dangers which lie in unexpected places. The poet shows that it is only too easy for the young or naive to be abused, even in organisations like the church.
Comment Written 08-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2023
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Absolutely. The good news, punishment awaits those who harm the innocent, retribution is also on the horizon for those who destroy our peace, our safety and take our lives.
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All best wishes frm Cambridge UK!
Holy Easter!
Comment from Jim Wile
This was an interesting and thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed the reference to Revelation where the devil is thrown in the abyss for a thousand years.
Today, it seems like the thousand years must be up, and he's back at it. Time for another angel to put him back in.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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This was an interesting and thought-provoking poem. I enjoyed the reference to Revelation where the devil is thrown in the abyss for a thousand years.
Today, it seems like the thousand years must be up, and he's back at it. Time for another angel to put him back in.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2023
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If I had my way, he would never get out. Thank you for your comments.
