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Ancient Art of Poetry

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A compilation of poems

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Comment from strandregs
Excellent
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Clip of the small hand turning
Never heard that before. What does it mean?
I like all the images and phrases you use to describe the changes and seasons.
:+))Z.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    Clip of the small hand turning.is in reference to the hand of a clock. Thank you so much for your review and for your time and for your excellent comments. It's much appreciated and I hope you're having a great day!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Exceptional
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Wow. I like this free verse that describe the process of rebirth of the summer which I'm still waiting patiently. Your poems are deep and philosophical. I had to read multiple times to understand.

Excellent.

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    Thank you Jasmine for your amazing review and for your rating. I am pleased and surprised and I am also happy that you find my work deep in philosophical. As always I appreciate your time and effort and your kind comments. I hope you're having an awesome day thank you again!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You chose some unusual words to describe the forthcoming favourite seasons of mine, spring and summer and you created some magic here Lea, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    Ty Dolly glad you think so! Enjoy your day and thank you again!!
Comment from JT traveller
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Stunning, contemporary and beautiful. I love the way you have melded the words together to transcend seasons. A magical read. A wonderful poem Lea. Jacqueline

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    Thank you! I always am grateful for your readings and look forward to your Reading your work! Thank you again and have an awesome night!
reply by JT traveller on 04-Apr-2023
    Thank you. I most certainly will. You too.
Comment from Ricky1024
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This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with No Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky

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 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023


reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023
    Thank you I'm glad you liked it. I'm glad you're anybody likes when I write but especially you because you're so accomplished. So thank you so much for your time and your kind words have yourself and awesome night!