Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

powerful and moving tribute to a woman and her late lost child. I loved the image, the message and the words. I like the last lines the best

She's with you every day
No need to say goodbye
Just know someday you'll play
With Lucy in the sky

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Jake!

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

The small planet found filled of diamonds. Also, a movie that I still must watch. I enjoyed reading your poem. Well thought out. Clearly written. Nice poetic tone set. I'm baffled about the last stanza. Do you view it as a heaven ? Or do you think spacecowboys would sell the minerals to jewelers ?

 Comment Written 06-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 06-Apr-2023

lol hmmm

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

lucy is a diamond in the sky ;)


beautiful poem for your best friend - i'm sure these words will help to comfort her


thank you for sharing with us

shelley ð?¦?

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so, so much, Shelley! <3

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Jessica, This is a very beautiful poem you have penned for your best friend about the loss of her sweet baby daughter. You used loving and kind words that gives hope to the mother to look up to feel and see her Lucy. Thank you for sharing. love and blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Teri<3

Comment from Jim Wile

Excellent

This is a beautiful poem, Jessica. You've turned a sad subject into something both cheerful and hopeful. I loved the imagery you used ("the stars lighting your path," "the wind echoes her laugh," "a kiss of sun she'll send.")

I'm sure the loss of her child was devastating to Katy, but I'm also sure she'll find some solace in this lovely poem. Jim

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Jim. Your words mean so much to me.
<3
Jessica

Comment from Chrissy710

Exceptional

Hi Jessica What beautiful words, and so nicely presented, lovely rhyme and meter. It did remind my of the Beatles song Lucy in the Sky with diamonds,
I am sure you friend Katy will treasure this and her Lucy will always be with her. A heartfelt lovely poem worthy of a six
Cheers Chris

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much for your beautiful review and appreciated 6 stars, Chris. Means a lot! <3

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

How very sad and heartfelt are these words about loss and grief Jessica, and I am so sorry for your friends loss and I am glad you are there to support her. Your words are touching and brings tears to my eyes, this is a tragic loss of a new born child, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 04-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 04-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly<3

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Oh my gosh, I am so sorry to read this in your author notes. I do like how you assure the grieving mom that even though physically the child isn't there, she will never be forgotten. All the mother has to do is look around her. Beautifully written. My condolences to the family. Gretchen

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so much, Gretchen!
<3
Jessica

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is a heartwarming and comforting poem to a mother who has lost a daughter. I can relate. I lost a daughter, a few hours after birth, years ago. In your poem, you've included well chosen words of beauty and inspiration. Your artwork pairs perfectly. I almost expected to see traces of Lucy in the clouds.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

I'm humbled by your words. Thank you so much. I am so incredibly sorry to hear of your loss, I imagine no amount of time lessens the grief. My heart goes out to you! <3 <3
Jessica

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Exceptional

Wow, what a beautiful, heartwarming verse for your friend who grieves. I pray your endearing words will lift her face to the sunshine, and that she will find all that you say to be true. Lucy if looking down on her from above. Exquisitely crafted.

 Comment Written 03-Apr-2023

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reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023

Thank you so very much, I'm humbled by your kind worded review! Means the world.
<3
Jessica