This is What Love is
And way more...3 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
You do a great job showing the positive, negative, joys, struggles, up and downs of what love is. And you acknowledge that the list is just a sample as there is so much more.
Good luck in the contest. I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
You do a great job showing the positive, negative, joys, struggles, up and downs of what love is. And you acknowledge that the list is just a sample as there is so much more.
Good luck in the contest. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you for the feedback! It is very much appreciated. This poem felt a bit inadequate to me but I wanted to enter the contest so I did my best. Thank you so much!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You just about covered all angles of love here and after reading this horrifying list I wonder why we still fall in love, but our hearts cannot help opening up to another like minded person, a fine write Amanda, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
You just about covered all angles of love here and after reading this horrifying list I wonder why we still fall in love, but our hearts cannot help opening up to another like minded person, a fine write Amanda, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank so much for the feedback Dolly! This felt tougher than it should have been but it's so difficult to describe love. I appreciate your input!
Comment from LisaMay
Love is indeed an all-encompassing feeling and situation, which you have traversed with skill in your effective rhyming stanzas covering the positive and negative aspects of caring and sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
Love is indeed an all-encompassing feeling and situation, which you have traversed with skill in your effective rhyming stanzas covering the positive and negative aspects of caring and sharing.
Comment Written 03-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2023
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Thank you so much for the review Lisa. I appreciate your feedback!