Please Bring Me Flowers
Short Fiction35 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
This is an interesting and detailed story. It is kind of sad to think that there are people who would do that kind of thing this couple dead. It is sad or that there are people in convalescence in long-term care facility to have no one no family no one to care for them at all. Patricia.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is an interesting and detailed story. It is kind of sad to think that there are people who would do that kind of thing this couple dead. It is sad or that there are people in convalescence in long-term care facility to have no one no family no one to care for them at all. Patricia.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you Patricia, for your review and insightful comments. There are times when someone out lives all family and has no one to look after their best interest. Thanks for reading and for your generous stars.
Blessings, LJButterfly
Comment from Jim Wile
That was a cleverly-written story of a couple of hustlers who have perfected their scheme. They seem to have planned for variations and made good use of little details like the yellow dress in the closet. It was a good surprise ending. Nice job. Jim
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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That was a cleverly-written story of a couple of hustlers who have perfected their scheme. They seem to have planned for variations and made good use of little details like the yellow dress in the closet. It was a good surprise ending. Nice job. Jim
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you Jim for your review and very encouraging comments. Thank you also for the stars.
Blessings, LJButterfly
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, this was just creepy all day long. I didn't see any errors but I was really immersed in the story.
I hope this stays fiction and isn't going on out there somewhere.
D.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Well, this was just creepy all day long. I didn't see any errors but I was really immersed in the story.
I hope this stays fiction and isn't going on out there somewhere.
D.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you Doug, for your review and humorous comments. If I could think this story up, I'm sure some ruthless people out there can also think of it. Thanks again for reading and for the stars.
Blessings, LJButterfly
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is an outstanding story! I was completely engaged and thinking what a loving daughter and son-in-law Maria had. I was stunned when I learned the truth. They were crooks, but on the other hand, they made Maria's last few months pleasant, visited her every week and brought her flowers. That doesn't make what they're doing okay, but it's a lot more than some elderly people get. Really excellent story. I'm glad I had one six left!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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This is an outstanding story! I was completely engaged and thinking what a loving daughter and son-in-law Maria had. I was stunned when I learned the truth. They were crooks, but on the other hand, they made Maria's last few months pleasant, visited her every week and brought her flowers. That doesn't make what they're doing okay, but it's a lot more than some elderly people get. Really excellent story. I'm glad I had one six left!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you Mary, for your review and insightful comments. You are right. Some elderly people don't have anyone to look out for them. Marla in my story, paid a million dollars for those flowers. But she died happy. Thanks again for reading and for SIX beautiful, bright, shiny stars.
Blessings, LJButterfly
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You are welcome.
Comment from Raul1
Your story is an interesting piece of drama between the daughter getting married and her parent. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job! I like it. Thank you for sharing!
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Your story is an interesting piece of drama between the daughter getting married and her parent. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Nice job! I like it. Thank you for sharing!
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2023
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Thank you Raul for reading my story. I always appreciate your reviews. Thank you also for your generous stars.
Blessings, LJButterfly
