The Book....
A tale of true love.12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You did a great job with this love poem entry, Julie. It's short, but says so much about what a Book filled with love is. The Bible is the best example. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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You did a great job with this love poem entry, Julie. It's short, but says so much about what a Book filled with love is. The Bible is the best example. Very well done, and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 01-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry had a strong message, Julie. I liked
the end rhymes. The last line reads like a word was left
out--be kind to yourself--maybe Be kind to YOU today.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Your contest entry had a strong message, Julie. I liked
the end rhymes. The last line reads like a word was left
out--be kind to yourself--maybe Be kind to YOU today.
Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest, Jan
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
The Bible is said to be God's letter of love to all mankind, and you captured this well. I would have preferred "And be kind today" or something similar, as it seems a verb is needed in the last line. But I like your thoughts, and send good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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The Bible is said to be God's letter of love to all mankind, and you captured this well. I would have preferred "And be kind today" or something similar, as it seems a verb is needed in the last line. But I like your thoughts, and send good wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 30-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Comment from jmdg1954
You did well in creating a love poem in fifteen words.
You spoke about God's love for everyone, andcto follow his way and word and be kind to yourself.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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You did well in creating a love poem in fifteen words.
You spoke about God's love for everyone, andcto follow his way and word and be kind to yourself.
Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the book,
and a positive message about
being kind to yourself.
-Good lock in the contest.
Note: Your poem is listed as fiction.
Tom is the only one who can change it.
Go to Community, "Contact Us" and
explain you need it listed as poetry.
-It makes a difference who sees it
and for voting purposes, too.
-It always looks so much better
posted as a poem, too!
-Always check to see how something
is listed; you can change it yourself
as long as it's in preview mode.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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-You have used your 15 syllables well with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the book,
and a positive message about
being kind to yourself.
-Good lock in the contest.
Note: Your poem is listed as fiction.
Tom is the only one who can change it.
Go to Community, "Contact Us" and
explain you need it listed as poetry.
-It makes a difference who sees it
and for voting purposes, too.
-It always looks so much better
posted as a poem, too!
-Always check to see how something
is listed; you can change it yourself
as long as it's in preview mode.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thanks for feedback.
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You are welcome.
Comment from evilynne
Lovely words of wisdom, well chosen. God's love is the greatest of all loves. Your poem fits the requirements nicely. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Lovely words of wisdom, well chosen. God's love is the greatest of all loves. Your poem fits the requirements nicely. Best of luck!
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
The few words, in your poem, are written with a heart that is filled with romance or love. The season of spring brings to mine thoughts of kindness, less vulgar words and serene surroundings.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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The few words, in your poem, are written with a heart that is filled with romance or love. The season of spring brings to mine thoughts of kindness, less vulgar words and serene surroundings.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The Book is wisdom in life a guide to navigate the world, and yes love is an integral part of living life well with a good heart, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
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The Book is wisdom in life a guide to navigate the world, and yes love is an integral part of living life well with a good heart, a poignant write, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
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Comment from Ben Colder
I wish the best to you in the contest. Yes, God is love and he that knows those loves God and God loves him. Short and to the point. Blessings to you.
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I wish the best to you in the contest. Yes, God is love and he that knows those loves God and God loves him. Short and to the point. Blessings to you.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
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Comment from royowen
The truest and purser love of all gave Himself and His life, that we might live and be His kin, death could not hold Him, and rose again to eat the fruit of His work on the cross, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
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The truest and purser love of all gave Himself and His life, that we might live and be His kin, death could not hold Him, and rose again to eat the fruit of His work on the cross, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2023
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Thank you.
