Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Aw, Jake!
How I wish you had just added that third line with those darn two syllables to have entered your offering in the contest because your message is "spot on!" Definitely "unhinged folks" are running rampant these days... Perhaps they always have been...

Thank you for sharing!
Take Care!
diane

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

well i did add it but missed the deadline I supposed oh well

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

You got that right. People are definitely feeling the freedom to say and do some outrageous things these days.

Just one correction to meet the form:

You need a line three with two syllables.

Wishing you much luck with the voters.

Gloria

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

cool i will revise that thanks

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

Great statement. I may be wrong but I think you missed the 2 syllable third line. 1-1-2-12 format.

I appreciate the chosen image and the truth in your words. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

you are right and I will fix that now

Comment from Lady MJ

Excellent

You are right. There's no fun when everyone is angry and protesting. Well stated in minimal wording. Interesting photo. World conditions as they are, it could be a photographic display of societal upheaval from any country.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

thanks it was meant to be a bit universal unhinged people are everywhere

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Hello there. Your verse is so true easily understood. I would mention that the rules call for a 1-1-2-12 format. There supposed to be four lines with 1 syllable, then 1 syllable, then a line with 2 syllables, then a line with 12. Just thought I would mention it. Good luck.

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

thanks I will fix it now.