Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, this was very funny. How many times do we look for glasses that end up on top of our heads? (lol). Liked the senryu humor and satire.

Great imagery and visuals, very much enjoyed that one.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! I'm definitely not alone in this, it seems! lol

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Why I thought you wrote a poem about me. Mine are on my head (I think) as I type and for all the places I leave them, I buy my readers at the Dollar Star. This is a very fun poem. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

That is too funny, my dad does the same for readers! We tease him for buying them "in bulk"! Thanks so much for your awesome comment and feedback.

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

The times I've done that! Lol. I love this haiku, it gives me hope that I'm not the only one who goes a bit dotty now and again!! You've written a wonderful, fun poem for the haiku club. Bell done, Jessica. :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Sandra! I must say, I'm shocked to learn how many people can relate to this daily conundrum! lol thanks for your awesome review and feedback!
<3
Jessica

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This was well written rich in Theme and Imagery.
As I was dancing at nola's club in Atlantic City I was wearing my $50 pair of sunglasses.
They were white with blue lenses.
As I was dancing I felt somebody touching them but then they wound up with other people wearing them. But then I got them back on my little hat again.
And then I felt that touching feeling again didn't think nothing of it.
That's when I left in real life. Somebody stole them right off my hat probably put them in their pocket.
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This also, read well and Flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks and have a nice day.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Oh no, that's awful! I usually just drop mine- by bending down and forgetting they're on my head! haha
Thanks for your your review!
<3
Jessica

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This is a good choice of topics for this humor exercise. This happens those who wear glasses, young or old.
Interesting artwork with the reflection of the glasses.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan

 Comment Written 28-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Joan! I appreciate the feedback.

reply by dragonpoet on 29-Mar-2023

Don't mention it, Jessica.
Joan

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

I can totally relate to your humor senyru you have penned for the contest. You used very good descriptive words and very neat imagery. Best wishes in the contest! Teri

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Teri!

Comment from June Sargent

Excellent

Lol I'm sure many can relate to this humorous Senryu. I have lost my glasses many times - to find them on top of my head. Well done. I enjoyed this.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, June! I appreciate the feedback. Im finding this to be a common conundrum!!

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

hahaha... I've done that a few times :)

Hello, thank you for participating in the haiku club event. Great entry with a good syllable count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation and imagery. The satori is a good twist.

Good job,

Gypsy

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you, Gypsy! :)

Comment from jmdg1954

Excellent

I don't think your the only one loses their glasses to find them a few minutes later perched atop there noggin!

This did get me to chuckle after I read the note it's about yourself. That's honest!

Thanks, John

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thanks, John! A daily struggle, I'm afraid.

Comment from godlucifer

Excellent

i have a niece who's always losing her glasses. i think kids tend to lose their glasses more than adults. your poem was written creatively. thanks for the read.

truly
godlucifer

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023

Thank you! :)