Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Oh, Jessica, this is precious. My mysteries are solved daily and the cellphone is always found nearby. A delightful read in senryu poetry. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Sally, I've complained to my husband that I can't find my phone.. while on the phone with him! lol sometimes I surprise myself! Always so nice to hear from you <3

reply by Sally Law on 26-Mar-2023

I am blind in real life. I cannot even tell you how many times a day I lose things and with them my mind! Blessings,
Sal xo

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This poem was adorable and hilarious! I think we have all done this in the past. Thank you so much for sharing your poem here, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you, Jessi!
:)

Comment from BeyondtheShadows

Excellent

No truer a tale than the missing glasses on top of the head! Great job taking something a majority of us do and turning it into a mystery! Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much! It appears to be a common conundrum! lol
<3
Jessica

Comment from Faith Williams

Excellent

Lol... great senryu, Jessica! Your first two lines flow well while your last line brings it all together. One question remains-what mystery is next to be solved? Thanks for making me smile.

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 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023

Thank you so much, Faith! I'm thrilled to have made you smile! :)