Blinding Conundrum
Haiku Club Submission- Humor Senryu34 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
Great title to this delightful haiku Jessica. This is a common conundrum for so many of us.
Nice satori line as well.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
Great title to this delightful haiku Jessica. This is a common conundrum for so many of us.
Nice satori line as well.
Well done
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Janet, thank you so much for your kind words and review!
<3
Jessica
Comment from royowen
This must be one of the most frequently experienced misdemeanours, the art of losing something vital, such as one's glasses, even thought they're perched on one's noggin' beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
This must be one of the most frequently experienced misdemeanours, the art of losing something vital, such as one's glasses, even thought they're perched on one's noggin' beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy! I'm learning I'm not alone in this conundrum! Blessings to you and yours!
<3
Jessica
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That?s right
Comment from Emily Barrett
Very funny haiku. I used to have a pair of clear-rimmed glasses that I was losing all the time even when they were right in front of me. I had to switch to colored rims just so I wouldn't lose them anymore!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
Very funny haiku. I used to have a pair of clear-rimmed glasses that I was losing all the time even when they were right in front of me. I had to switch to colored rims just so I wouldn't lose them anymore!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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I love that!! I may have to consider colored.. or neon rims! Haha
Comment from Mintybee
Oh, I have had this problem. How do you find your glasses when you can't look properly without them? I think this works well as a humour haiku. It's funny, and the syllable count works. This is widely relatable. Nicely done.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
Oh, I have had this problem. How do you find your glasses when you can't look properly without them? I think this works well as a humour haiku. It's funny, and the syllable count works. This is widely relatable. Nicely done.
Mintybee
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much! It's nice to know I'm not alone in this mystery... haha
Comment from Julie Lau
That's very good, Jessica - in fact it's very, very good. It reminds me of someone I know... intimately. I hope you do well in the contest - you deserve it. All the best, Julie Lau
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
That's very good, Jessica - in fact it's very, very good. It reminds me of someone I know... intimately. I hope you do well in the contest - you deserve it. All the best, Julie Lau
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Julie, thank you so much for your kind words and feedback! I truly appreciate it:)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Well, Jessica, I have heard about the disappearing glasses and they are often found on top of the head of the one who lost them, to begin with. This is funny in the sense that so many people lose their glasses and haven't the foggiest idea where they went!
Good job, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jesse
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
Well, Jessica, I have heard about the disappearing glasses and they are often found on top of the head of the one who lost them, to begin with. This is funny in the sense that so many people lose their glasses and haven't the foggiest idea where they went!
Good job, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jesse
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thanks so much, Jesse!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Jessica.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I know what you mean about "disappearing glasses." If you don't know where they are, how can you find them?!
-I like the light hearted nature of your poem and that the mystery was solved.
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
-Good artwork and nice presentation, Jessica.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I know what you mean about "disappearing glasses." If you don't know where they are, how can you find them?!
-I like the light hearted nature of your poem and that the mystery was solved.
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Pam! It seems this is a common mystery!
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You are welcome, Jessica, I think it is:)
Comment from JT traveller
Haha. How true is this!!! I often ask people around, where are my glasses? Their reply is always either on your face or on your hat! Good one. You have tapped into a common ailment. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
Haha. How true is this!!! I often ask people around, where are my glasses? Their reply is always either on your face or on your hat! Good one. You have tapped into a common ailment. Best of luck.
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Haha thank you so much, Jacqueline! This is a common mystery it seems!!
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Yes 🤣
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved this clever write, I do this all the time so your words resonate with me. The photograph is intriguing and your Haiku is amusing, much enjoyed Jessica, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
I loved this clever write, I do this all the time so your words resonate with me. The photograph is intriguing and your Haiku is amusing, much enjoyed Jessica, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much, Dolly!
<3
Jessica
Comment from patcelaw
Usually when I lose my glasses, I find them someplace that I just laid them down. I forgot to pick them up when I got through whatever I was doing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
Usually when I lose my glasses, I find them someplace that I just laid them down. I forgot to pick them up when I got through whatever I was doing. Patricia.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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It seems to be a common occurrence! Thanks so much for your comment :)