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Blinding Conundrum

Haiku Club Submission- Humor Senryu

34 total reviews 
Comment from Janet Foor
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Great title to this delightful haiku Jessica. This is a common conundrum for so many of us.
Nice satori line as well.

Well done

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Janet, thank you so much for your kind words and review!
    <3
    Jessica
Comment from royowen
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This must be one of the most frequently experienced misdemeanours, the art of losing something vital, such as one's glasses, even thought they're perched on one's noggin' beautifully written Jessica, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Roy! I'm learning I'm not alone in this conundrum! Blessings to you and yours!
    <3
    Jessica
reply by royowen on 27-Mar-2023
    That?s right
Comment from Emily Barrett
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Very funny haiku. I used to have a pair of clear-rimmed glasses that I was losing all the time even when they were right in front of me. I had to switch to colored rims just so I wouldn't lose them anymore!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    I love that!! I may have to consider colored.. or neon rims! Haha
Comment from Mintybee
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Oh, I have had this problem. How do you find your glasses when you can't look properly without them? I think this works well as a humour haiku. It's funny, and the syllable count works. This is widely relatable. Nicely done.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much! It's nice to know I'm not alone in this mystery... haha
Comment from Julie Lau
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That's very good, Jessica - in fact it's very, very good. It reminds me of someone I know... intimately. I hope you do well in the contest - you deserve it. All the best, Julie Lau

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Julie, thank you so much for your kind words and feedback! I truly appreciate it:)
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Well, Jessica, I have heard about the disappearing glasses and they are often found on top of the head of the one who lost them, to begin with. This is funny in the sense that so many people lose their glasses and haven't the foggiest idea where they went!
Good job, and I wish you all the best in the contest!
Jesse


 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thanks so much, Jesse!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good artwork and nice presentation, Jessica.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-I know what you mean about "disappearing glasses." If you don't know where they are, how can you find them?!
-I like the light hearted nature of your poem and that the mystery was solved.
-A good entry; good luck!

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Pam! It seems this is a common mystery!
reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Mar-2023
    You are welcome, Jessica, I think it is:)
Comment from JT traveller
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Haha. How true is this!!! I often ask people around, where are my glasses? Their reply is always either on your face or on your hat! Good one. You have tapped into a common ailment. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Haha thank you so much, Jacqueline! This is a common mystery it seems!!
reply by JT traveller on 27-Mar-2023
    Yes 🤣
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I loved this clever write, I do this all the time so your words resonate with me. The photograph is intriguing and your Haiku is amusing, much enjoyed Jessica, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much, Dolly!
    <3
    Jessica
Comment from patcelaw
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Usually when I lose my glasses, I find them someplace that I just laid them down. I forgot to pick them up when I got through whatever I was doing. Patricia.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    It seems to be a common occurrence! Thanks so much for your comment :)