Make Your Choice
A or B ...12 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
You are a cool breeze on a hot face
You with wit whittle to make me smile
You are my leprecorn
A star aligned with the other five
To make the world a nice place. :-))Z.
Nice mustache.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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You are a cool breeze on a hot face
You with wit whittle to make me smile
You are my leprecorn
A star aligned with the other five
To make the world a nice place. :-))Z.
Nice mustache.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Aren't you my best FS friend. Be well with winds at your back, and the sun on your face, hopefully not in a desert.
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If I was in a desert...
Can it be strawberry jelly?
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That would be dessert, silly
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your poem, Tom. The pictures
were a great addition to your well thought out words. I
agreed with your decision. Things aren't valuable like the
relationship and memories made of two in love. Your ending
was great--so positive and encouraging to others.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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You did a great job with your poem, Tom. The pictures
were a great addition to your well thought out words. I
agreed with your decision. Things aren't valuable like the
relationship and memories made of two in love. Your ending
was great--so positive and encouraging to others.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Parochial. Elementary. Simple. Each may describe my writing, I suspect, though from where the ideas arrive might be considered quizzical, sardonic, taunting. Jekyll and Hyde-like. An enigma. Yes, I wrote of that a week past. Thanks for the review, which gets you a nomination.
Comment from Wendy G
That's a beautiful love poem. And it is relationships and memories which bring happiness, not things, no matter how expensive they are. Very well glowing and written from the heart. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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That's a beautiful love poem. And it is relationships and memories which bring happiness, not things, no matter how expensive they are. Very well glowing and written from the heart. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2023
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Not sure this was a contest entry or submitted all alone. You are a peach, as they say in Georgia.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A wonderfully penned love poem. It is a different love poem, first acknowledging your love and choice of memories over diamonds; then challenging your reader to choose which is more important, diamonds or memories. Your reader must look at their love to find which is more important.
Brilliant.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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A wonderfully penned love poem. It is a different love poem, first acknowledging your love and choice of memories over diamonds; then challenging your reader to choose which is more important, diamonds or memories. Your reader must look at their love to find which is more important.
Brilliant.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 27-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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The point I tried to make is post mortally diamonds are gone, wisps of smoke, vaporized but memories will be available.
Comment from bob cullen
Congratulations on a great achievement. She must be a tolerant woman. Fabulous photos. Jeanette and I married in 74, but we did have a ten-year break midstream and then remarried.
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Congratulations on a great achievement. She must be a tolerant woman. Fabulous photos. Jeanette and I married in 74, but we did have a ten-year break midstream and then remarried.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Love is hard to find, to nurture but worth every moment with the right person. I cannot imagine where I would be without her support. She is all that I am not and collectively it helps to have her back and she mine as needed.
Comment from Teri7
Tom, This is a very nice and very well written poem you have penned for the What is Love Poetry contest. You used very good and heartfelt words with lovely pictures. You two are a very lovely couple! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Tom, This is a very nice and very well written poem you have penned for the What is Love Poetry contest. You used very good and heartfelt words with lovely pictures. You two are a very lovely couple! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
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Thank you. May the wind be at you back and the sun shining on your face.
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from JT traveller
I'll take the memories anyway. A touching poem, well written. Upbeat and light. I enjoyed reading it. You can always have both...if your loved once passes before you and chooses to be cremated, their is a company that will compress the ashes into a diamond.
Rollicking, happy poem. Best of luck Tom.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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I'll take the memories anyway. A touching poem, well written. Upbeat and light. I enjoyed reading it. You can always have both...if your loved once passes before you and chooses to be cremated, their is a company that will compress the ashes into a diamond.
Rollicking, happy poem. Best of luck Tom.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Thanks for your time and comment, still, I'll pass on the cremation bit. Watch for dragons.
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Have a great day Tom. Jacqueline
Comment from jmdg1954
Can I assume you were married in 1978?
I was joined by my lovely bride in 1979. Or is it more correct to say I was allowed to join her on that day? Clearly she could have done better, must've been my charm (ha).
Nicely written poem, Tom.
John
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Can I assume you were married in 1978?
I was joined by my lovely bride in 1979. Or is it more correct to say I was allowed to join her on that day? Clearly she could have done better, must've been my charm (ha).
Nicely written poem, Tom.
John
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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We wedded in ?79. First year was pure adjustment, my being 31 whereas she was twenty-one. Since, pure bliss, and as you I married up.
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Same year as me and my better half!
Comment from Ric Myworld
It's taken an old rogue like me a lifetime to finally figure out the true secret to happiness in this old world. We all just want someone to care about us as much as we do them. And sadly, it doesn't happen often. For those fortunate enough to find it, count your lucky stars! Thanks for sharing.
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It's taken an old rogue like me a lifetime to finally figure out the true secret to happiness in this old world. We all just want someone to care about us as much as we do them. And sadly, it doesn't happen often. For those fortunate enough to find it, count your lucky stars! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
Great post, Tom!!
Like you, I chose memories, which you can treasure and cherish. I liked the tone of the poem, it's like a romance, an ode to LOVE.
Good luck for the contest.
Mario
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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Great post, Tom!!
Like you, I chose memories, which you can treasure and cherish. I liked the tone of the poem, it's like a romance, an ode to LOVE.
Good luck for the contest.
Mario
Comment Written 26-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
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The selected bride by my side makes life easy to pen such thoughts to share.
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The selected bride by my side makes life easy to pen such thoughts to share.
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The selected bride by my side makes life easy to pen such thoughts to share.
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True!!
