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My loneliness

Adark moment in my life

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Comment from Nicki Nance
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I like how your decision to give a prayer of thanks gave a sense of hope for all that is missing. Heart problems and heart medications can pour depression over a person like glaze over a donut. Mitral valve issues pour anxiety the same way. Somewhere between is peace.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 04-May-2023
    Thank You
    My mitral valve is still ticking for how long is anyone's guess.
    My cardiologist says - how long is a piece of string.
    Peace will come one day with Christ. In Him we live and move and have our being
Comment from JT traveller
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Great poem. You are never alone here on Fanstory. You might just have a bit of "Pumphead", it may explain your memory loss. It should improve over the next few weeks. I wish you the best of luck. You always have writing as your friend dinky die Aussie!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 29-Mar-2023
    I presume tis is Aussie to Aussie
    Thankyou for your penmanship trust the water of life washes through you to lifes end.
reply by JT traveller on 30-Mar-2023
    Yes, indeed I am. Back on home soil. Thank you for your kind words Graham. J