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Buffet Captives

Humorous 50 Word Story contest entry

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good entry into the 50 Word Story contest. The text is a great size. The story is stated with clarity and is easily understood. We have all had instances in which we were unable to do a basic action. You did a good job with a few words in telling a solid and relatable story. The visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you for the great review and stars, Sandra. I really appreciate the stop in. I'm glad you liked the piece. have a yourself a wonderful day.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 26-Mar-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from Lea Tonin1
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This is a really cute submission that made me smile and we need some levity every once in a while cause. I swear there's not enough humor or good feelings left in this world so thank you for the smile. I really appreciate it! This is a really good job. You have complied with the contest rules. Very well and produce a work of art that makes me chuckle and yes so good luck it in the contest. I hope you have a great day!

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Lea. I agree, this world seems so lacking in humor anymore. I need laughter in my life or it's just too boring. Lol. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at the piece. Have yourself a wonderful weekend.
Comment from Julie Lau
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Haha, good story and well told. I have to blushingly admit that the same thing happened to me, but worse. I thought I was locked in a toilet at a dance and had to wait for some other girls to come in to 'release' me. I hadn't had much to drink, honest. Good luck in the contest, Julie Lau

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Lol. Yeah, I could imagine that was a little awkward. Thank you for the fantastic review, Julie. I really appreciate the gracious stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this silly piece.