Comment from royowen

Excellent

I think you've pplayed him before Maria, is he Spanish? He was singing in English, although like a lot of Christian metal bands one can't understand him, heh heh, great post though, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo : your soul('s) just a rag.

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

No, he's Brazilian, Roy. And I've played him quite a few times :)
I didn't mean to use a verb in the last line, but I could follow your suggestion without altering the syllable count. I'll think about it.
Thanks for your review.

reply by royowen on 24-Mar-2023

It?s the same syllable count Maria, the ?S doesn?t add. Bless you

reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

I know. I?m sorry if I didn?t explain well.

reply by royowen on 24-Mar-2023

No, you did an amazing job, keep writing Maria,

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. You couldn't resist! I think Fanstory will know more about Dan Vasc than more people in our age group because of you. Yes, his voice can wring our hearts! Best wishes in the contest!

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 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023

I couldn't help laughing when reading your review.
In the next few days, he will be releasing his version of Amazing Grace and I'm really looking forward to it.