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Infectionous Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "Deceptional Ability."
Poetry that is different.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I didn't find one error in this post. YES!!!!! Thank you for sharing. I am positive that God's hand handle everything and it will work out. Maybe not during the time we want it, but He will always win.

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Glad I finally got one psst the teacher!
    Thanks,
    Socrates
Comment from country ranch writer
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She really knew how to Up up pal and take you for everything you were worth.
Leaving you distraught and very confused and a broken man.
Nicely presented. Good luck.

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
    Wise Chinese man say...
    "Smack me once, I turn the other cheek"
    "But smack me twice?
    "I take your rice and wife too!"
    Doctor Ricky 1024
    "Still Preaching to the Choir here at Fanstory "
reply by country ranch writer on 25-Mar-2023
    Haha good one
Comment from royowen
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I think there was only one girl who managed to "get my goat" and was even able to do it to me twice. But it wasn't done again, but all's well that ends well, well done, temptation of this kind is pretty common, well done Ricky, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 24-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
    Thanks Roy.
    Normally we're tempted by temptation with a beautiful woman.
    This is a rather very large woman who cannot control her lower watering abilities.
    And also is quite ravenous when it comes to eating.And, then throws up even in a beautiful hotel room.
    Yes, after gorging at the Harvest buffet.
    Hard Rock Hotel Casino in Atlantic City.
    Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 24-Mar-2023
    Wow!