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The Mouth of Babes

3rd Place Finish

15 total reviews 
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Nothing wrong with third place in a competition,
Douglas. Your entry was fun to read. Of course,
young kids say those kinds of things, and adults
can't help but laugh. This was one of those times.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Miss Adeleigh is something special! I am always happy to place. It is validating. I am even more happy to hear from my friends like you, Jan! Blessings.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Ha ha ha, oh dear, this could get you into trouble if she repeats this in company! What a funny post, your poor innocent daughter is a cutie, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023
    Thanks Dolly! She?s my treasure.
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Lol. That is hilarious. Children say the funniest things sometimes.

Good luck with the contest.
Have a great night.


-Kerry.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Kerry. Lets be friends!!!
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 27-Mar-2023
    You Bet! My new friend 🌈🦋
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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LoL from the mouths of babes .... your daughter is adorable.

your entry for the Humorous 50 Word Story writing prompt contest is very funny, thank you for that. Children see the world with a new vision of old things, like the Bible. I like how you said "no" "he didn't " so patient ... non-judgmental. Well done. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thank you, my friend! I appreciate your kind words. Yes, Adeleigh is my youngest and very adorable. I appreciate you as well!
Comment from jessizero
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This was a very humorous story indeed! I've heard of some vocabulary mix-ups before, but this one takes the cake. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    It really was a funny moment in life.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
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What a surprising ending. I bet your granddaughter had you going with that Biblical story. Neither word is close to the same sound; we live and learn when it comes to a word pronunciation.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Yes, too funny!
Comment from jmdg1954
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Ah... either she misspoke or the child misunderstood. Either way, it made for a tenuous time for dad in this instance.

A good contest entry. Best of luck.
John

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thanks! Might do well!!!
    A very funny moment in time. Appreciate you!
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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Yes, this would have been really funny - especially if the young girl had asked the question loud and clear in church... lol. I like that this is a true story said out of innocence from a wee children learning about God. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    She?s a cute little thing! Might even place!
Comment from Bill Schott
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This humorous fifty-word story, The Mouth of Babes, has the proper word count and finds a teaching moment that may have come around just in time. Cute.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thanks! She?s a cute one!
Comment from JT traveller
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Out of the mouths of babes indeed! That is quite funny. I hope the father could hold back his mirth. I particularly enjoyed the use of dialogue. It made for a very interesting read. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 26-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2023
    Thanks! It?s hanging on. Kids are funny creatures!