Comment from Stephanie Rollins

Excellent

I very much loved the visuals. I saw the apples and their juice dripping. I saw the wind lifting the leaves. I heard the laughing. It is simply beautiful.

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 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 27-Mar-2023

Thanks so much!
Send me links to your work and will review :)