PM, I am bursting forth!
A Poem of thanks and celebration41 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hey Jim,
I am glad you are now doing well and can now do all the things you want to do. This shows the power of prayer and the strength given be friends and faith. I like the term Over Soul.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hey Jim,
I am glad you are now doing well and can now do all the things you want to do. This shows the power of prayer and the strength given be friends and faith. I like the term Over Soul.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Your kind words are appreciated!
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Don?t mention it, Jim.
Joan
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Don?t mention it, Jim.
Joan
Comment from Julie Lau
The insertion of a pacemaker has certainly made a difference to you! Before I read your notes I was thinking Prime Minister, thinking you may be an Aussie or Brit, but personally I wouldn't be ecstatic over one of them for a neighbour. I'm glad to read of your new lease of life.
Julie Lau
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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The insertion of a pacemaker has certainly made a difference to you! Before I read your notes I was thinking Prime Minister, thinking you may be an Aussie or Brit, but personally I wouldn't be ecstatic over one of them for a neighbour. I'm glad to read of your new lease of life.
Julie Lau
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Julie, whew... I am hoping my PM stays away from the body politic 🎶
Comment from JT traveller
At first I thought you were speaking of a Prime Minister. When I realised it was a pacemaker I read your poem again. I absolutely love it. You have taken great joy from a medical procedure to correct your arrhythmia. That brings me joy too.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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At first I thought you were speaking of a Prime Minister. When I realised it was a pacemaker I read your poem again. I absolutely love it. You have taken great joy from a medical procedure to correct your arrhythmia. That brings me joy too.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Smiles of abundant
Joys.... Back to you JT. Thanks very much!
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😊👍
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I appreciate your notes, and am sorry you had to
have that procedure, but it sounds like you are doing
fine, so that is great news.
-I really like your poem and it deserves my last six of the week
because it is so joyful and full of gratitude.
-I love your repeating line, and am thrilled that you are "bursting forth!"
-I think in most cases when someone goes through this, there is a new
appreciation for life, themselves, and those they hold dear.
-I really like the concluding verse, especially the last line.
-Maybe we will even see more humor in your work!
-Take care, be well, and have a great evening and upcoming weekend.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation.
-I appreciate your notes, and am sorry you had to
have that procedure, but it sounds like you are doing
fine, so that is great news.
-I really like your poem and it deserves my last six of the week
because it is so joyful and full of gratitude.
-I love your repeating line, and am thrilled that you are "bursting forth!"
-I think in most cases when someone goes through this, there is a new
appreciation for life, themselves, and those they hold dear.
-I really like the concluding verse, especially the last line.
-Maybe we will even see more humor in your work!
-Take care, be well, and have a great evening and upcoming weekend.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Dear Pam, my sincere and deepest thanks! You are carried in my grateful heart for your and so many other well wishes received on FS. What an amazing body of souls this assemblage of Divinely endowed scribes are who stimulate, encourage and evoke the best of the human condition.
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You are very welcome, Jim, and I appreciate your reply. It is a very supportive community we are a part of.
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, PM I Am Bursting Forth, has the proper formatting and celebrates the successful installation and promise of this modern marvel to keep your ticker tocking. Neat.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This free verse, PM I Am Bursting Forth, has the proper formatting and celebrates the successful installation and promise of this modern marvel to keep your ticker tocking. Neat.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thanks Bill
Comment from June Sargent
I'm glad that your pm implant was a success! Now your physical body will be able to keep pace with the rhythm of your spiritual one - which has always been on point. Take care!
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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I'm glad that your pm implant was a success! Now your physical body will be able to keep pace with the rhythm of your spiritual one - which has always been on point. Take care!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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June, your kind words make my spirit soar, thank you.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Well done on this poem of thankfulness for your Pace Maker. What a difference it will make in your life. My mom had one for many years and it surely made her life better.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Well done on this poem of thankfulness for your Pace Maker. What a difference it will make in your life. My mom had one for many years and it surely made her life better.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hi Anne, our lives have been so much better with the awesome medical advancements for certain.
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You are so right
Comment from Ginda Simpson
What a lovely note of gratitude to your Fanstory family. And it is a tribute to your restored heart and the hope that lies therein. Best wishes for continued blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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What a lovely note of gratitude to your Fanstory family. And it is a tribute to your restored heart and the hope that lies therein. Best wishes for continued blessings.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you,for everything, going slow, but going strong!🙏
Comment from Sarah Das Gupta
A poem full of gratitude and energy. It is encouraging to hear such positive thoughts and the humorous presentation of the PM! It is a pleasure to read!
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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A poem full of gratitude and energy. It is encouraging to hear such positive thoughts and the humorous presentation of the PM! It is a pleasure to read!
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Thank you Sarah, 🙏
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Best wishes!
Comment from Paul McFarland
Glad you came through the PM emplacement okay, Jim. Medical technology today is amazing. I have had two heart attacks. and the stents that they put in enable me to do anything I want.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Glad you came through the PM emplacement okay, Jim. Medical technology today is amazing. I have had two heart attacks. and the stents that they put in enable me to do anything I want.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023
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Yep, two open hearts over ten years and now a pace maker, guess God wants me around here a while longer.
