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Poetry that is different.
2 total reviews
Comment from
barbara.wilkey
Yes, Evil lurks in many places. Thank you for sharing.
Yes because we'll need it! (comma after 'Yes')
Now why are you now in a situation where you become Homeless? (comma after 'Now')
Now what if after all of this Bullshit! (comma after 'Now')
Yes of desire of revenge! (comma after 'Yes')
God there will be not a single. Amen! (comma after 'God')
God there will be absolutely Pain and suffering you see? (comma after 'God')
Comment Written 23-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
Thanks again Barbara for spending the time to review and edit my works.
Have a wonderful day!!
Doctor Ricky
Comment from
royowen
Even a worldly psychiatrist worth his salt know it's sensible to forgive, I think the memory of offence remains because the one and only use that the past is a darn good teacher, the process should be repeated ad finitum, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023
Thanks Roy. As usual, pleasantly reviewed in your own classic way!
As always,
Doctor Ricky
reply by royowen on 22-Mar-2023
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