Comment from playinaround

Excellent

Short and true. I enyoyed your poem. I honestly e you u win the contest. Great choice of words. The best of luck for contest. Thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023

Thank you, PA

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

You got a chuckle out of me for this little ditty of a 1-2-3-4 poem entry. All syllables are in check to give a word of advice to find a wife. She will either make things easier or ensure the strife is ever present... lol. Good luck ;-)

 Comment Written 23-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 23-Mar-2023

Thank you, DD

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 1-2-3-4 Poem writing prompt contest. Will a wife help with problems? Maybe, the same goes with husband. Good rhyme.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 22-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023

Thank you, Gypsy

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

It not only meets the requirements for a 1-2-3-4 prompt but also offers good advice for MEN. Now you need to even the score and score another 1-2-3-4 for women.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

I'll get on that.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

I'm not sure taking a wife would be wise, but I'll take your word for it. I liked your rhymes and the overall tone of the poem. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

Thanks, Jessizero

Comment from Kayliegh

Good

Definitely true! I feel like in this generation there are too many people who don't want to get married, but your poem is definitely accurate. You should get married, and if you don't you'll wish you had. Great poem! Also love the picture!

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

Thanks, Kayliegh

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your words and especially like your last line "Take a wife". Your rhyming words have a strong steady beat and there is a good feeling in your words.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

Thanks, mm

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

It is a well known fact that when we are a couple we are much happier and we console each other in times of trouble, I enjoyed your warm words here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023

Thanks, Dolly