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The Spirit in Me

When the spirit moves me to write.

7 total reviews 
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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Yet another poetry form that I have never heard of - someone should write a poem about all the poetry forms that there are!

I like the way this reversed form lines up on the page - it almost looks like a cross (not sure that's what you intended). Words that tell the reader of your faith on His path.

Nicely done, Jose.

Pam

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Pam. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from aryr
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The picture was wonderful, Jose because it showed your faith. Your words were fantastic because they made constant reminders of your faith and hopes. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings!!!

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Alie. :) With things the way they are, and me getting older, I find myself leaning more toward God and His Son. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
reply by aryr on 21-Mar-2023
    One day at a time, Jose. You are so welcome.
Comment from jessizero
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I like how you used the bold font to emphasized certain words. You did a great job with the format. I loved your poem. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Jessie. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Sally Law
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Super cool poetry form and holds your profession of faith. The Lord is the Savior, Lord, Protector, and Shepherd to me too. Jesus is so wonderful.!!

Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the challenge.
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Sally. :) I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from papa55mike
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Hope and love are the two most powerful forces in the universe, and they are great attributes of our Lord. What a wonderfully written poem.

Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    Thank you, Mike. :) As long as we have love by our side, Hope will always be in our hearts. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
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Love your spiritual tetractys, Jose! You met the form well. Did you know why it's called that? It's that the first four numbers add up to ten.
This is a great message for everyday - that God is our Refuge and Shield and He alone is the source of our Hope.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    The spirit moved me, Helen. :) I wanted to try something different. These are words by king Dave in one of the Psalms don't remember which but it stayed with me. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
reply by lyenochka on 21-Mar-2023
    There are several psalms that come to mind but Psalm 91 came to me first.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a faithful and spiritual write and I enjoyed the journey here and I love that you saved the best word 'til last, hope is what we all rely on, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
    I believe you got it, Dolly. :) Without Hope where are we? I'm glad you enjoyed it.