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a one line poem3 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
You could have used a picture from the flooding in California, and began the line with "WE," if in fact you want to complete your author notes. Either way. Good luck. No ill intent intended.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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You could have used a picture from the flooding in California, and began the line with "WE," if in fact you want to complete your author notes. Either way. Good luck. No ill intent intended.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Oh yeah, sure, thanks. I love the waterfall too.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Your note is appreciated.
-Effective imagery creates a good contrast
between having too much water with flooding and storms,
yet other parts of the world don't have enough water to drink.
-A very good message; thanks for sharing it.
-Very well done; good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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-Very nice image and presentation.
-You have written a good one line poem with a good topic.
-Your note is appreciated.
-Effective imagery creates a good contrast
between having too much water with flooding and storms,
yet other parts of the world don't have enough water to drink.
-A very good message; thanks for sharing it.
-Very well done; good luck.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Okay haha. I was trying to outline how half of the world is dying from thirst and yet we have water everywhere. However, I love your interpretation much more! Thanks.
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I appreciate your reply. Interpretation is what makes poetry interesting and unique. I am glad you liked my interpretation.
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You are right, Ive changed it to make sense now. Thanks, that was close!
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You are very welcome. The poem is very good, and I changed the review to reflect that.
Comment from jessizero
Wow! That was quite a remark in a simple one-line poem. It was a great insult in poetic form. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Wow! That was quite a remark in a simple one-line poem. It was a great insult in poetic form. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi. Im sorry i didnt mean it to be an insult. I know half of the world is dying from lack of thirst. ie in the desert or because of wars. But I might change it to make it more appealing. thanks for the review.
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No!!! I just went back and realized I misread it. I am so sorry! Don?t change a thing!
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I just changed it, you were 100% correct. I wrote it very fast and needed to change it to my meaning.
