It is a Good Day
What kind of day is it?2 total reviews
Comment from JT traveller
Yes Gloria. It's always a good day for a good day. Happy Monday. Great, uplifting one liner.
2 suggestions if I may, a bright and cheery illustration or photograph to set off your upbeat words and this site seems to have done something weird to your title, "Itâ??s a Good Day"
Best of luck. J
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Yes Gloria. It's always a good day for a good day. Happy Monday. Great, uplifting one liner.
2 suggestions if I may, a bright and cheery illustration or photograph to set off your upbeat words and this site seems to have done something weird to your title, "Itâ??s a Good Day"
Best of luck. J
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for taking the time to review my work. Thanks for the suggestions.
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My pleasure. Anytime and thx for the nomination. :)
Comment from Lea Tonin1
Hi Gloria
It is a good day for a good day every day is a good day for a good death for a good day for sure!
Some suggestions for you that you probably need going forward. I think I'll have a look at your poem at the title at the top in your title. You've got some funny figures you're gonna want to fix that. Also I think in a one line poem. It is difficult to have an impact so I think that's what they're looking for is for one line to just hit them in order to generate a response.
Suggest also a picture at the top and enlarging your fonts so older people can read what you're writing. I would say a complete rework would be your best bet And then resubmit suggest a nice splash of color to go with your sunny you've written.
Do not let this discourage you from writing as in anything takes practice. My suggestions for you would be to keep writing cause. There's a soul there that helps you and you're able to resubmit on time. Have yourself a great evening!
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Hi Gloria
It is a good day for a good day every day is a good day for a good death for a good day for sure!
Some suggestions for you that you probably need going forward. I think I'll have a look at your poem at the title at the top in your title. You've got some funny figures you're gonna want to fix that. Also I think in a one line poem. It is difficult to have an impact so I think that's what they're looking for is for one line to just hit them in order to generate a response.
Suggest also a picture at the top and enlarging your fonts so older people can read what you're writing. I would say a complete rework would be your best bet And then resubmit suggest a nice splash of color to go with your sunny you've written.
Do not let this discourage you from writing as in anything takes practice. My suggestions for you would be to keep writing cause. There's a soul there that helps you and you're able to resubmit on time. Have yourself a great evening!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for an honest review. I?ll definitely listen to what you have suggested. Have a great evening too
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Thank you gloria you're a good sport and I look forward to reading more about what you have if you have talent don't let anyone tell you different!
