Moon Magic
A Roundabout Poem for Potlatch Poetry23 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
There is always those little creatures hidden within the woods, or so they say. But as a big kid who has often wondered if someone or something is always always watching, this brings me to wonder again. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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There is always those little creatures hidden within the woods, or so they say. But as a big kid who has often wondered if someone or something is always always watching, this brings me to wonder again. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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I agree. We never know. They're out there, I think. Thanks, Ric.
Comment from AnnieDawn
You did a wonderful job on this "roundabout". I am always amazed at the variety of ideas and events that people use for their poetry and stories. You have a great one here and I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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You did a wonderful job on this "roundabout". I am always amazed at the variety of ideas and events that people use for their poetry and stories. You have a great one here and I loved reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 21-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for reviewing.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is lovely, Yvonne. I was just writing out the form and that I would read one who knows. I lovely the magic/fantasy feel in this one about finding contentment in the woodlands. Beautifully presented, well done.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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This is lovely, Yvonne. I was just writing out the form and that I would read one who knows. I lovely the magic/fantasy feel in this one about finding contentment in the woodlands. Beautifully presented, well done.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Wouldn't it be amazing to happen up on such a place!
Comment from Sally Law
I really like this snappy poem and it is rightly named because it comes 'round about. The internal rhyme is really cool. Beautifully written and illustrated as always.
Sending you my best today, and best wishes for the poetry challenge.
Sal XOs
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I really like this snappy poem and it is rightly named because it comes 'round about. The internal rhyme is really cool. Beautifully written and illustrated as always.
Sending you my best today, and best wishes for the poetry challenge.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Ulla
Oh ,Yvonne, the magic of the night in a deep forest is something else isn't it? That's when the fairies comes out and all other real or imagined creatures. I loved it. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Oh ,Yvonne, the magic of the night in a deep forest is something else isn't it? That's when the fairies comes out and all other real or imagined creatures. I loved it. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. Wouldn't it be amazing to happen up on such a place!
Comment from Kerry L Batchelder
Magical as in a children story and. It makes me think of tiny people, possibly elves, as they work and play among the roots under the moonlight. This would make a great childrens story. Great job!
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Magical as in a children story and. It makes me think of tiny people, possibly elves, as they work and play among the roots under the moonlight. This would make a great childrens story. Great job!
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. I like to write about fairies and such.
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Do do I. How neat we have that in common.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and repeating lines
create a vivid word picture of the magic woodlands,
"A happy land, this forest fief."
-I also like the "tiny caravan" and how they
live a contented life "in woodlands quite remote."
-You have created a very peaceful realm.
-I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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-Very nice artwork and presentation.
-You did a good job with the poem and topic.
-Effective imagery, rhyme, and repeating lines
create a vivid word picture of the magic woodlands,
"A happy land, this forest fief."
-I also like the "tiny caravan" and how they
live a contented life "in woodlands quite remote."
-You have created a very peaceful realm.
-I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. Wouldn't it be nice to happen onto a place like that?
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You are welcome, and yes it would!
Comment from Moonbeams Musings 55
I enjoyed your poem and with your descriptive verse you convey the calm and peaceful haven the woodland. Very well written, great job. Your woodland would be a great escape from the hustle and bustle and craziness of daily life.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed your poem and with your descriptive verse you convey the calm and peaceful haven the woodland. Very well written, great job. Your woodland would be a great escape from the hustle and bustle and craziness of daily life.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. It's the kind of place I'd like to find.
Comment from Wendy G
This is quite a complex format, but you have succeeded well! It has a fairytale and magical quality to the descriptive words you have used, and it reads so well. Excellent presentation and image, all well chosen.
Wendy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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This is quite a complex format, but you have succeeded well! It has a fairytale and magical quality to the descriptive words you have used, and it reads so well. Excellent presentation and image, all well chosen.
Wendy
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this lovely review.
Comment from Pantygynt
I presume the name 'roundabout' owes something to those French poems such as rondeaux that live by virtue of repeating patterns. The addition of metre to which you have held well throughout makes it more pleasant to the English Ear
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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I presume the name 'roundabout' owes something to those French poems such as rondeaux that live by virtue of repeating patterns. The addition of metre to which you have held well throughout makes it more pleasant to the English Ear
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you. It was fun to do, and I like the challenge of different forms.
