Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

This is a good entry into the one-line poem contest. The text is a great size. The message reads clearly like a succinct story. That part is well-done.
I am glad you used colored background. The visual fits well. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

Thanks for the read and feedback. Appreciated.

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 20-Mar-2023

You are welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

So true and some people serve a prison sentence for something they have been misjudged on and their entire life is taken from them, a poignant write, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

A misjudgment may have nothing to do with the legal system, but rather involve a personal misjudgment made about another person. That was the point I was trying to make. However, you interpretation also works. Thanks for the read and the feedback.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Good image and nice presentation.
-You have a good topic for your one line poem.
-The message about a misjudgment is a good one;
it can leave lasting emotional scars.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thanks for the read and the encouraging feedback.

reply by Pam (respa) on 19-Mar-2023

You are very welcome.