Thank You Memories
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Comment from Gloria ....
Hello Jay. So good to see you. It is true that houses which become home over the years are precious and we hope to stay there until we are gone.
You have written a fine poem here, and you have shared many memories with us.
Always a pleasure.
Gloria
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Hello Jay. So good to see you. It is true that houses which become home over the years are precious and we hope to stay there until we are gone.
You have written a fine poem here, and you have shared many memories with us.
Always a pleasure.
Gloria
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from bob cullen
A comment that suggests a satisfied, fulfilled and contented life. All I can say to that is congratulations on a long life well lived. I must admit, I more than like your work, generally it carries the wisdom of much achievement and life learning.
I really enjoy your writing.
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A comment that suggests a satisfied, fulfilled and contented life. All I can say to that is congratulations on a long life well lived. I must admit, I more than like your work, generally it carries the wisdom of much achievement and life learning.
I really enjoy your writing.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have composed a sweet verse, honoring not just an old house, but a home. One that has served you throughout the years, providing shelter and comfort, and lots of memories. I wish you there always.
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You have composed a sweet verse, honoring not just an old house, but a home. One that has served you throughout the years, providing shelter and comfort, and lots of memories. I wish you there always.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from lyenochka
That's so wonderful that you are able to stay in your own house, Jaybird. So many people had suffered during the pandemic when they were living in nursing homes so I'm glad you can stay in your own home.
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That's so wonderful that you are able to stay in your own house, Jaybird. So many people had suffered during the pandemic when they were living in nursing homes so I'm glad you can stay in your own home.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I hope you can stay in your home, too.
Excellent poem about your home.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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I hope you can stay in your home, too.
Excellent poem about your home.
The rhymes and meter are not forced and they flow well.
the structure makes sense, it draws on emotions and it presents strong images.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job with your informative poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Your rhyme pattern worked
well. You described your home with words straight
from your heart. Yes, I pray you can stay at your
special home forever.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
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You did a great job with your informative poem.
I enjoyed reading it. Your rhyme pattern worked
well. You described your home with words straight
from your heart. Yes, I pray you can stay at your
special home forever.
Thanks for sharing, Jan
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from Ulla
Oh, I can so understand you would like to be able to stay where you are until the very last. If you got help, I can't see why that shouldn't.be possible. I loved your poem as always. I'm so glad you posted. I have been looking out for your poems. Ulla:)))
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Oh, I can so understand you would like to be able to stay where you are until the very last. If you got help, I can't see why that shouldn't.be possible. I loved your poem as always. I'm so glad you posted. I have been looking out for your poems. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I do understand wanting to remain in your home that has so many memories. I feel the same way. Home is special to us. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us.
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I do understand wanting to remain in your home that has so many memories. I feel the same way. Home is special to us. Thank you for sharing your beautiful poem with us.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from mermaids
I have been in my house over forty years so I can relate to your words. I plan on staying in my home forever as well. This is a poem many can relate to. Your home is a place of good memories and good feelings.
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I have been in my house over forty years so I can relate to your words. I plan on staying in my home forever as well. This is a poem many can relate to. Your home is a place of good memories and good feelings.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
Comment from jessizero
I am glad to see you have posted another poem. I can understand wanting to stay in your home. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
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I am glad to see you have posted another poem. I can understand wanting to stay in your home. Thank you so much for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
