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Hot Wheels, Death Wheels

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Comment from Kaiku
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I wonder if there could be an organized form of street racing that was off the beaten track and allowed these goofballs to do their thing,. I believe much of this recklessness is driven by the sheer desire to thumb their noses at authority and be the talk of the neighborhood. No matter what the cost. Nice work. Ciao

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    Films like fast and furious just pump up impressionable teens and youngsters .

    I think your assessment is correct they like to be considered badasses and challenge the authorities.

    I think la leva ( having to do a year in the army .. I don?t know the word in English) should never have been taken away.

    It taught teens discipline and responsibility.

    I m glad you enjoyed the read. Thanks for the extra star ( smiles)
reply by Kaiku on 20-Mar-2023
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Comment from dragonpoet
Excellent
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Hi,
You use the words well in this poem about dangerous games. I like the artwork. It shows the speed and it kind of reminds my of the movie "Tron".
This poem describes well the act of drag racing and the stupidity and danger of it. This is one pass time that shows a way some humans battle with death and the fear of it. Unlike others, like Evel Knievel, who only puts himself in danger. I think his spectators are put at a safe distance if he failed,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
    I?m a sci fi nerd , I tried to watch Tron but I gave up after 20 minutes .. I don?t like computer generated imagery films.

    I had to look up Evel Knievel ..he was a professional stunt man on wheels

    I think these teens enjoy the adrenaline rush ..

    films like "fast and fury "should not be allowed.

    Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem!


reply by dragonpoet on 19-Mar-2023
    You're welcome.
    "Tron" seemed so much better when it first came out in 1982 before the present day computers and high tech graphics came out.
    Joan
Comment from Julie Lau
Good
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You have fulfilled the requirements of the challenge and paint a very true and graphic picture with your words. These fools are a threat to society and themselves. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2023