Those Torturous Little Demons
A silly rhyme22 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Well Debi, you explained and articulated my dilemma at the moment, I don't usually wake up at this time, I usually sleep well, but I was wide awake at 1:30 am. So I thought catch up on some reviewing, it's now 5:45, but I'm feeling sleepy now. Just love this clever poem, well rhymed, great language, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
Well Debi, you explained and articulated my dilemma at the moment, I don't usually wake up at this time, I usually sleep well, but I was wide awake at 1:30 am. So I thought catch up on some reviewing, it's now 5:45, but I'm feeling sleepy now. Just love this clever poem, well rhymed, great language, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Hi Roy,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing. Sorry to hear you were having trouble sleeping and I hear you. I hope things return to normal and you are sleeping well again.
Debi
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No, that?s fine, I?m not an insomniac like a couple of friend, just that occasional one. Bless you for caring.
Comment from lyenochka
I loved this! Please keep your phone or pen and paper handy to jot some ideas down. You may even find that those ideas will invade your dreams so that you need to write first thing in the morning, too! And with a writing theme, I hope this does well in the contest!!
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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
I loved this! Please keep your phone or pen and paper handy to jot some ideas down. You may even find that those ideas will invade your dreams so that you need to write first thing in the morning, too! And with a writing theme, I hope this does well in the contest!!
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Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Hi Helen,
Thank you for the encouraging comments.
I keep the phone in the other room so I can get some sleep. Sometimes, I do climb out of bed and reach for the pen and paper across the room, but it's only when the thoughts refuse to quit.
Happy writing to you.
Debi