Everlasting
One touch can be...2 total reviews
Comment from RodG
This poem has sensual overtones that definitely suggest passion. But rhyming all three lines weakens your poem. The phrase "fingertips and SUCH" does not work at all.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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This poem has sensual overtones that definitely suggest passion. But rhyming all three lines weakens your poem. The phrase "fingertips and SUCH" does not work at all.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem.
Comment from kahpot
Beautifully written and presented, love the added touch of rhyme-very clever, your words certainly bring back memories, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Beautifully written and presented, love the added touch of rhyme-very clever, your words certainly bring back memories, very well done, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for this delightful review.
