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The Pathway to Pain and Misery
2 total reviews
Comment from
country ranch writer
A cry for help it wasn't your time to die God had other plans for you.you job here on earth is not finished, your mission for your sons legacy in his memory is not done.it's I complete until people respond to our crusade in his name to sign your donor cards and pass life on to those on the waiting list so the can get a second chance to enjoy life before it's to late!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
Thanks for reading, reviewing and enjoying this one with your message!
Doctor Ricky
reply by country ranch writer on 19-Mar-2023
Comment from
Raul1
This is a very interesting story and I like the dialogue you wrote about this person is talking to God and asking him questions. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
Thanks for reading and enjoying this one and have a blessed day!
Doctor Ricky
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