Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Guess this would inspire passion even if it weren't illustrated to arouse the reader. I wonder what makes it a "lost love" as that takes the passion to a memory and the poem is sad.

 Comment Written 21-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 22-Mar-2023

dear friend thank you for reviewing my
poem "Lost Love". These words are spoken by someone whose love is leaving him. He speaks remembering the love they once shared as he longs for her softness just once more. Bloop

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I think this guy is concentrating on the wrong thing here as he selfishly only thinks of his own needs! No wonder the relationship is over, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

thank you for reviewing my poem "Lost Love". You're right about his thinking. he is totally focussed on his own needs
before he considers how she might be feeling. He could do with a wake up
call bloop

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Now there is a reason for passion, (nice photo) are there any words! Ha! just joking, your words enhance the photo wonderfully, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023

thank you for reviewing my poem "Lost Love" It is about someone whose lover is leaving him. Sadly he pleads for one more assignation. bloop