Dear Dick
A Letter From God4 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
It appears that God may have redacted the free religious clip art. If that is what happened...that would be pretty interesting. If your creative mind did that...still interesting.
The letter from God reads like a "Pep Talk." That would be a cool thing to get. The only input I would have about the writing is in the last sentence of the Angel wings paragraph. I would suggest deleting the word--Maybe.
Thank you for entering the contest. Excellent work. Terry.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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It appears that God may have redacted the free religious clip art. If that is what happened...that would be pretty interesting. If your creative mind did that...still interesting.
The letter from God reads like a "Pep Talk." That would be a cool thing to get. The only input I would have about the writing is in the last sentence of the Angel wings paragraph. I would suggest deleting the word--Maybe.
Thank you for entering the contest. Excellent work. Terry.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Terry, for reading this story and for the very nice review. Interesting that you picked up on the picture, but that is the way I copied it. God doesn't need a pen and paper.
I deleted 'maybe' in that paragraph, thanks for the suggestion. (That's right, he's not uncertain of anything.)
I appreciate your positive feedback.
Best regards,
Dick
Comment from royowen
I really like this essay Dick, it would be nice if people would more respectful and think, not only of others, but God Himself, and realise that whether they believe in God or not, standards are set in consistent philosophy, and to virtually mock that is the great crime of selfish humanity, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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I really like this essay Dick, it would be nice if people would more respectful and think, not only of others, but God Himself, and realise that whether they believe in God or not, standards are set in consistent philosophy, and to virtually mock that is the great crime of selfish humanity, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Roy, for reading this story and for the very nice review.
Not all people have lost their way, but today is not the day of my parents. They both taught me some important lessons, and I'm happy for their teachings. Blessings to you and yours as well.
Dick
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You and me both
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Ha ha ha, I am sorry if this was not meant to be amusing Dick, but I did find it funny. Your thanks for the prayers and the angel wings not being free and your extensive help you give to others! God has reviewed your curriculum vitae here and also he has been spying on your behaviour, it sounds like you are doing all the right things to get your place in Heaven, I hope you are given a good seat when the time comes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Ha ha ha, I am sorry if this was not meant to be amusing Dick, but I did find it funny. Your thanks for the prayers and the angel wings not being free and your extensive help you give to others! God has reviewed your curriculum vitae here and also he has been spying on your behaviour, it sounds like you are doing all the right things to get your place in Heaven, I hope you are given a good seat when the time comes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Dolly, for reading this story and for the very nice review. Many of us don't know what we don't know, but it is best to be on our best behavior. The world is going to hell.
Thanks for taking the time to provide your feedback.
Best regards and thanks again!
Dick
Comment from BethShelby
I enjoyed the letter from God. How nice to know that you have God's approval. He had very little criticism of you and hinted that you might be on your way to earning you wings. Nicely written.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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I enjoyed the letter from God. How nice to know that you have God's approval. He had very little criticism of you and hinted that you might be on your way to earning you wings. Nicely written.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you, Beth, for reading this story and for the very nice review.
GREAT to hear from you again.
Best regards,
Dick
