Turn-Ons
Variety: the Spice of Life ... here's my ...19 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I love this! It's concise and to the point and gets at the things you love. Great pictures too - very good overall presentation. And I am also "turned on" by many of the same things:-)
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I love this! It's concise and to the point and gets at the things you love. Great pictures too - very good overall presentation. And I am also "turned on" by many of the same things:-)
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Life is great especially with a supportive comment. Thank you.
Comment from karenina
Can't say I disagree with your poem and list of some of your favorite things. Each, I can see would be a "turn-on" to the spirit, and it's nice to dwell a moment and think of the good stuff! Happy Saint Patrick's day, whaetver your nationality!
Karenina
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Can't say I disagree with your poem and list of some of your favorite things. Each, I can see would be a "turn-on" to the spirit, and it's nice to dwell a moment and think of the good stuff! Happy Saint Patrick's day, whaetver your nationality!
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Momma was from Liverpool England, Dad's mom from Krakow, Poland. Me, from Philly. Ingenius piece written with this. All begun thinking how good life has been, is and hopefully be.
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Best to look at things "Sunny Side Up!"
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You'll be missed especially by me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
It sounds like you like to have fun Tom, and Fridays still have the same feeling for me as they always did and I celebrate every Friday with a glass of French Champagne, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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It sounds like you like to have fun Tom, and Fridays still have the same feeling for me as they always did and I celebrate every Friday with a glass of French Champagne, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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A root of thanks and a flute of Champagne to you Dolly.
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Cheers!
Comment from jmdg1954
An excellent post for a Friday. It provided a smile I so far was lacking for the day.
Good rhyming pattern through and through...
Are the photos provided all yours?
Cheers, my friend.
John
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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An excellent post for a Friday. It provided a smile I so far was lacking for the day.
Good rhyming pattern through and through...
Are the photos provided all yours?
Cheers, my friend.
John
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Yes sir. My pics save for me in pink. A friend snap that with my Nikon 300.
Always thankful for
Your read and comment
Comment from Ric Myworld
I've been accused many times of a one-track mind, no matter where it drifts it always comes back to the same subject. And my brother from another mothers, sometimes I think we must be twins. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
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I've been accused many times of a one-track mind, no matter where it drifts it always comes back to the same subject. And my brother from another mothers, sometimes I think we must be twins. LOL. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
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I have stopped thinking of Your closing statement. I am convinced. Be well, bro?.
Comment from Sally Law
This is precious, Tom. You have a great list and your prize-of-a-wife at the end; all arrayed in a collage of rhyming poetry. Great stuff.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
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This is precious, Tom. You have a great list and your prize-of-a-wife at the end; all arrayed in a collage of rhyming poetry. Great stuff.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal :))
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Ingenuity discovered.
Even I am Surprised when out of nowhere a thought, word, or sighting tells Me to Put it in words quick before it disappears
Thank you
Comment from CrystieCookie999
What a fun mostly mono-rhyme poem for a Friday. I thought you did a great job with this as a list poem also. Here are some I also agree with: scrumptious entrées
acts on broadway
ballerina's cabriolés
FRIDAY's
I suggest you can take the apostrophe out of FRIDAY's unless you are referring to the restaurant called TGI Friday's. Cute post.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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What a fun mostly mono-rhyme poem for a Friday. I thought you did a great job with this as a list poem also. Here are some I also agree with: scrumptious entrées
acts on broadway
ballerina's cabriolés
FRIDAY's
I suggest you can take the apostrophe out of FRIDAY's unless you are referring to the restaurant called TGI Friday's. Cute post.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Yes remove the apostrophe
Done
Thank you
Comment from BethShelby
It sounds like you are all about living the good life, Tom. I know from the picture you share you are a good photographer and enjoy taking pictures. That is one of my favorite hobbies as well. Nice poem.
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It sounds like you are all about living the good life, Tom. I know from the picture you share you are a good photographer and enjoy taking pictures. That is one of my favorite hobbies as well. Nice poem.
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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Thank you, and yet photography has gone the way of dinosaurs. It's been four or five years since I chased subjects. My body simply fails to walk far searching for subjects, and as for getting down, forget it.
I did enjoy it while it lasted.
Comment from Julie Lau
I love the sentiments in this poem, and the accompanying photos. There are just a couple of points of punctuation that I would like to dispute:
1. Turn-ons needs to be hyphenated as the two words have to combine to
convey the meaning.
2. No apostrophe in entrees (excuse my lack of Frenchified punctuation
- I couldn't manage it here).
All the best, Julie L
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reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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I love the sentiments in this poem, and the accompanying photos. There are just a couple of points of punctuation that I would like to dispute:
1. Turn-ons needs to be hyphenated as the two words have to combine to
convey the meaning.
2. No apostrophe in entrees (excuse my lack of Frenchified punctuation
- I couldn't manage it here).
All the best, Julie L
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Comment Written 17-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2023
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So I looked it up and found this:
turnon [ turn-on, -awn ]SHOW IPA
See synonyms for: turnon / turnons on Thesaurus.com
Seems it is only one word.
As for entree, I see what you mean. I'll fix it and thanks.
and now after further inspection hyphenated the title.
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Thanks for your reply. That's interesting, turnon being one word. Searching my memory, I think I've never had to write it. I see Spellcheck doesn't like it.
