Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed the sentiment of escape in this write and sometimes we just have to get away and make a fresh start in life and put the past behind us. Been there a few times, a poignant write, good luck with the contest and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you for your input and the excellent rating you have me!!!

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Hi ! Welcome to Fanstory!
I like how you focused on the most dramatic point in your Dribble fiction. In just 50 words you showed us the character's resolution to escape from some situation. Best wishes in the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you so much for your review and excellent rating!!!!!

Comment from JT traveller

Excellent

First and foremost congratulations on your milestone post and welcome.

I enjoyed your flash fiction, it built tension in only a few sentences. Your story promised of more to come. Well done.

This site does funny things to words sometimes. A typo perhaps? Easily remedied.

"SheĆ¢??s now on the run."

 Comment Written 16-Mar-2023

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reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023

Thank you for taking time to read and review my work! Thank you for the excellent rating!!!