Letter From God Above
Contest Entry5 total reviews
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Very well done, Raul. It is a thoughtful letter written. What I like the most is your letter from "God" is one where He tells that people must do their part to have a peaceful world. He can only do so much and cannot solve all problems if people ignore Him.
It is truly a letter I would have liked to receive from Him/
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Very well done, Raul. It is a thoughtful letter written. What I like the most is your letter from "God" is one where He tells that people must do their part to have a peaceful world. He can only do so much and cannot solve all problems if people ignore Him.
It is truly a letter I would have liked to receive from Him/
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes,
Mary
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Thanks! I hope I win!
Comment from Terry Broxson
Raul, this is a very thoughtful letter you have written. It does sound like something you might get. I have one suggestion for you. Consider breaking up the story into several paragraphs. Jay Squires, who was the FanStory writer of the year for 2022, cautions writers to "Avoid the Wall of Words."
What he means by that is that readers will look at a story and if it is one long paragraph. They may not read it. He suggests that writers give the reader a chance to breathe...frequent paragraphs give them that chance.
Just food for thought. Think about it or try it and see what you think. Good work, and thank you for entering the contest. Terry.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Raul, this is a very thoughtful letter you have written. It does sound like something you might get. I have one suggestion for you. Consider breaking up the story into several paragraphs. Jay Squires, who was the FanStory writer of the year for 2022, cautions writers to "Avoid the Wall of Words."
What he means by that is that readers will look at a story and if it is one long paragraph. They may not read it. He suggests that writers give the reader a chance to breathe...frequent paragraphs give them that chance.
Just food for thought. Think about it or try it and see what you think. Good work, and thank you for entering the contest. Terry.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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I thought about it and did it. Thank you for your help and review!
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Raul, it looks great!
Comment from nomi338
To get an actual letter from God, simply read the Bible. It is a real authentic letter from our creator. He tell us why and how we and the world we live in were created. He tells us what his mission was and still is for his creations. He tells us how to survive the harsh conditions the Devil has created out of jealous rage. It is a long letter, not to be completed in a short amount of time, but it can and must be read completely. I hope that you will enjoy reading it. Your letter was a joy to read, but the actual letter from God is even better.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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To get an actual letter from God, simply read the Bible. It is a real authentic letter from our creator. He tell us why and how we and the world we live in were created. He tells us what his mission was and still is for his creations. He tells us how to survive the harsh conditions the Devil has created out of jealous rage. It is a long letter, not to be completed in a short amount of time, but it can and must be read completely. I hope that you will enjoy reading it. Your letter was a joy to read, but the actual letter from God is even better.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Comment from Nicki Nance
I love this perspective. When people tell me they are amd at God, I usually say, "God might not be too happy with you either." I also like that you allowed God to give you some affirmation. Interesting choices!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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I love this perspective. When people tell me they are amd at God, I usually say, "God might not be too happy with you either." I also like that you allowed God to give you some affirmation. Interesting choices!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
Comment from Ben Colder
I was surprised He never asked you to study the Bible and there you would find the answers to your need, Good post. I see nothing wrong with it. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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I was surprised He never asked you to study the Bible and there you would find the answers to your need, Good post. I see nothing wrong with it. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Thanks!
