Ancient Art of Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Never Be Me...."A compilation of poems
30 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Sorry. Not my cup of tea. No ill intended.
I simply don't understand what has been written, but that's okay, some say I am illiterate. i d k. Maybe I am more slow than usual this morning.
I see where it meets the challenge, though.
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Sorry. Not my cup of tea. No ill intended.
I simply don't understand what has been written, but that's okay, some say I am illiterate. i d k. Maybe I am more slow than usual this morning.
I see where it meets the challenge, though.
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Thank you time for your review where FYI. The poem is about an abused woman and in the poem. She's saying you can beat me but you'll never have me it will never be me. I thank you for your time and for your review. Tom always appreciated and I hope you're really having a great day!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Standing on the Precipice
of Injustice, the Punishment doled out but still it doesn't take your soul, the heart of you. A very powerful and emotional 3-6-9 poem about abuse, Lea. Well written.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Standing on the Precipice
of Injustice, the Punishment doled out but still it doesn't take your soul, the heart of you. A very powerful and emotional 3-6-9 poem about abuse, Lea. Well written.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 01-May-2023
reply by the author on 01-May-2023
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Valda thank you so much again for your fabulous review and for your generous 6 stars I am grateful and honored!
For your time and for your insight grateful and happy that you'd see inside of my poems. Hope you're having a great night and thanks again!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there this is a wonderful entry for the contest.
I especially love this phrase:
"Not my soul in perpetual quake."
Nicely done my friend. Good luck to you.
Kerry
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Hello there this is a wonderful entry for the contest.
I especially love this phrase:
"Not my soul in perpetual quake."
Nicely done my friend. Good luck to you.
Kerry
Comment Written 30-Apr-2023
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2023
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Thank you Kerry for your kind response and your reviews and your time as always unappreciating you!
Always nice to hear I hope you're having a great evening and thank you again!
Comment from Boogienights
This poem is fascinating. I interpret it to mean that abuse cannot touch the inner core, but I may be wrong about it. Still, your words resonated with me. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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This poem is fascinating. I interpret it to mean that abuse cannot touch the inner core, but I may be wrong about it. Still, your words resonated with me. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 25-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2023
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You are absolutely Write about this poem you have good insight thank you so much for that! Thank you so much for your review for the time and for your kind comments. I hope you have a really great day talk!
Thank you again!
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Lea,
This poem seems to show the effects of physical abuse or sexual assault.
A victim is never himself or herself again after it happens.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Hi Lea,
This poem seems to show the effects of physical abuse or sexual assault.
A victim is never himself or herself again after it happens.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest
Joan
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you Joan I will. When I write about hard things, it us my way of peeling the onion. Every time i do it takes some of some of the power away.
Thank you again for your kind review, comments and time. I wish you a great day!!
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You're welcome. I understand that. Writing is cathartic.
Joan
Comment from Nicki Nance
This is a compelling statement in the 3-6-9 format. Your choice of graphic and presentation give texture to the message. Your title and comment leave your meaning up to interpretation.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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This is a compelling statement in the 3-6-9 format. Your choice of graphic and presentation give texture to the message. Your title and comment leave your meaning up to interpretation.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much Nicki i'm glad you liked it! I appreciate your kind review and play your comments as well are always appreciate have a great night!
Comment from Kaiku
great wording and visual for this story of strength and fortitude of a woman challenged in different paths of life. You always have some striking pics. Very nice.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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great wording and visual for this story of strength and fortitude of a woman challenged in different paths of life. You always have some striking pics. Very nice.
Comment Written 20-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2023
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Thank you I'm glad you liked this. I tried to put them together so that they're esthetically pleasing and people would like to read the news. Did you taking the time make sure you have an awesome day!
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Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
Gypsy
Precipice.3
And the granite unmasked.6
Not my heart in immobility.9
Injustice.3
Disguise of righteousness.6
Not my soul in perpetual quake.9
Punishment.3
That which he doled smiling.6
My body he forced, never will be........me.9
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Excellent entry for the 3-6-9 Poem contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I like the presentation too.
Gypsy
Precipice.3
And the granite unmasked.6
Not my heart in immobility.9
Injustice.3
Disguise of righteousness.6
Not my soul in perpetual quake.9
Punishment.3
That which he doled smiling.6
My body he forced, never will be........me.9
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you gypsy very kind of you. I was appreciate your word. I don't have anywhere thank you so much again have an awesome afternoon!
Comment from ElPoetry001
A dilemma.
Giving any status to forced
behavior creates a negative in consciousness.
Consider the circumstance
as nothing happened.
No anger, no acknowledgement. You no longer recognize that personal any level.
No event, no conquest, nada.
Sometimes sharing negative information creates a negative and a claim that whatever happened was your fault.
Some behavior must be reported. However, if no conclusive case can be made, at this time, it may be best to wait.
If pressure is brought to tell all, measure whether it will help or not.
"Who, him? Never. I don't know him and would never..."
Cut the negative cord to your conscience, and be free of guilt.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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A dilemma.
Giving any status to forced
behavior creates a negative in consciousness.
Consider the circumstance
as nothing happened.
No anger, no acknowledgement. You no longer recognize that personal any level.
No event, no conquest, nada.
Sometimes sharing negative information creates a negative and a claim that whatever happened was your fault.
Some behavior must be reported. However, if no conclusive case can be made, at this time, it may be best to wait.
If pressure is brought to tell all, measure whether it will help or not.
"Who, him? Never. I don't know him and would never..."
Cut the negative cord to your conscience, and be free of guilt.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind words your kind review and for your insight. This is really good and an extra effort on your part. I can see thank you very much for your words of encouragement. I am blessed and happy thank you very much again have a great day!
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Stay well.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
Powerful and moving poem about surviving a sexual assault. So many people unfortunately are victims of this heinous crime. The Me Too movement opening up many eyes.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Powerful and moving poem about surviving a sexual assault. So many people unfortunately are victims of this heinous crime. The Me Too movement opening up many eyes.
Comment Written 19-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind words and having a look at this problem is that it impacted. You appreciate your review and the time he took to do so thank you very much have a great night!
