Novella - Unwanted Dog
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Comment from country ranch writer
Can't blame the girl for your actions it's on you buddy boy.got to think before you act and at a young age it could have been worse you all could have been hurt badly.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Can't blame the girl for your actions it's on you buddy boy.got to think before you act and at a young age it could have been worse you all could have been hurt badly.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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That was why I got in the trouble I did. I can not even use the excuse boys will be boys. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Having raised four boys myself I am always amazed that males actually survive to adulthood. I really do. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
"Will I like it?" She asked. (lower case 's' on 'she')
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Having raised four boys myself I am always amazed that males actually survive to adulthood. I really do. Thank you for sharing. I enjoyed reading.
"Will I like it?" She asked. (lower case 's' on 'she')
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Some of the stunts I pulled I am amazed I did. Appreciate your comments and the review.
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, you were a wild one, I can remember my early teens, I likewise had red hair and freckles, but fortunately almost my entire free time was taken up with sport, didn't matter what it was I played, kept me out of trouble, well done Brett, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Heh heh, you were a wild one, I can remember my early teens, I likewise had red hair and freckles, but fortunately almost my entire free time was taken up with sport, didn't matter what it was I played, kept me out of trouble, well done Brett, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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Could be a mite of a wild one. Had to sow some oats. Appreciate your insights and the review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sankey
Wow! What a chapter this is. And there I thought Dusty had done a good job in getting you sorted discipline-wise! Perhaps this incident did it? Well done I hope you have caught all my re-posts. More new stuff coming.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Wow! What a chapter this is. And there I thought Dusty had done a good job in getting you sorted discipline-wise! Perhaps this incident did it? Well done I hope you have caught all my re-posts. More new stuff coming.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2023
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Keep them coming. Always enjoy reading what you post. Hope all is well in your world.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
The first two paragraphs don't seem to go with this part of your story. I could imagine you wanting to kill yourself when you saw that running truck jammed between two trees. This was funny and dangerous and just like a twelve or so year old.
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reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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The first two paragraphs don't seem to go with this part of your story. I could imagine you wanting to kill yourself when you saw that running truck jammed between two trees. This was funny and dangerous and just like a twelve or so year old.
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Comment Written 13-Mar-2023
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2023
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It was comical, up till that truck rolled off on its merry way. Appreciate your insightful comments and the review.
