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Walking with Christ

Have faith in the Lord.

14 total reviews 
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
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This is a good entry to the 8-word contest. The text is a great size, and I like it being centered. The message is stated with clarity, and it is easy to understand. Having faith is needed when trying to live a Christian life. Your visual fits perfectly. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your insightful review.
reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 13-Mar-2023
    You are welcome.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Excellent
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This is a good entry for the eight word poem contest. I like that it includes rhyme in such a small space and the spiritual message is strong. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your review and encouraging words.
Comment from jaded831
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

I have deep faith, buy lately have forgotten to pray with my heart, your poem reminded me to speak to Jesus with my heart. He heals all wounds and I need Him right now. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 13-Mar-2023
    With God, there is a reason for everything. I truly believe I wrote this poem for you. Jesus hears your heart. He's reaching out to you right now. Bless you. I love your poetry! I love its simplicity and depth. Each word is rich with meaning. I so much appreciate your review, especially the sixth star. Thank you.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Excellent entry for the 8 Word Poetry Contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good word count.

Goodluck

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Wendy G
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Excellent challenge for each of us to live and walk by faith. I don't quite agree with "Don't think", but certainly don't overthink, as He gives us brains and wisdom, but faith is to override these. But I know what you mean, and it's a good message. Best wishes for the contest.
Wendy

 Comment Written 12-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A fine faithful and uplifting write and I love the picture too. There are times when we need this kind of support so that we don't sink, I enjoyed your post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 12-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your review.
Comment from JT traveller
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You clearly are of strong faith. Your chosen illustration is the perfect accompaniment to your words. It is hard to write poetry in just eight words. I find most of these works sound more like messages or statements. Best of luck. Jacqueline

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from LisaMay
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Your 8-word poem very effectively uses rhyme to impart its message of supportive faith.
I do wonder why you have capital letters for 'Think and 'Hand', as I feel they are unnecessary in this context.

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    A very astute and correct observation. I've made the corrections. Thanks you so much for your review and constructive comments.
Comment from jmdg1954
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It's all about believing. With a belief in our Lord, nearly anything is possible.

Your photo went well with your poem.

Best of luck in the contest.
John

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from royowen
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The best thing one can do in this life is to grasp the hand of Jesus, our elder brother by some years, the safest place to be is at His side, a beautifully written entry in this contest, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 11-Mar-2023


reply by the author on 11-Mar-2023
    Thank you for your review. As you say, there is no safer place than beside our Lord. Your comments are much appreciated
reply by royowen on 11-Mar-2023
    Well done